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The Flavor of Our Love

The flavor of our love Bright within the sunrise sherbet where apricot reveals the sky, the sweet harvest of morning drips from your dawning smile as I kiss the taste from cinnamon cream lips, enjoying the ambrosial flavor of our love Good morning Soupers

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/28/2017 8:47:00 AM

Morning Mr. Chris. So let it be said. So let it be written. So let it be done. This entry is a precious little gem. Even in brevity you manage to speak. Have a wonderful morning. Fabulous title by the way with the exact enhancements of sherbet and cinnamon. How grand is that in the world of love and a moment in time. Very Well done entirely.

Chris Green
Date: 5/29/2017 9:00:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend. I so appreciate you taking the time to read my work and for leaving such wonderful comments for me to find. Lisa...thank you. :)

Maria Williams

Date: 5/27/2017 9:25:00 PM

Intimate moments flavored by cinnamon cream to enhance your love. Sounds simply delicious Chris...... Maria7

Chris Green
Date: 5/29/2017 8:59:00 AM

Thank you my friend for all of your kindness.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/25/2017 5:34:00 PM

A delicious poem shaped like a heart! Love it!

Chris Green
Date: 5/25/2017 5:46:00 PM

Thanks so very much Kim.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 5/25/2017 4:03:00 PM

I keep thinking about this. what you've really captured is the intimacy of the moment. good job! perhaps our best work comes when we relinquish control and let the words write themselves.

Chris Green
Date: 5/25/2017 4:11:00 PM

I think that is the an important aspect when expressing emotions. Thanks so much Dale.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/25/2017 12:24:00 PM

oh so sweet! :)

Chris Green
Date: 5/25/2017 12:34:00 PM

Definitely sweet. :) Thanks so much my friend.

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/25/2017 10:15:00 AM

Good morning:) and thank you for this little piece of sunrise, it is cloudy here AGAIN today

Chris Green
Date: 5/25/2017 10:49:00 AM

It is my pleasure my friend. I am always happy if I help brighten your day Lenna.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 5/25/2017 9:02:00 AM

I like this a lot. Judging by times of your responses everyone lives back east. I'm still waiting for coffee out here on the coast.

Chris Green
Date: 5/25/2017 9:19:00 AM

I think a lot are, I am smack dab in the middle of it all in Texas. Thanks so much Dale.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/25/2017 7:57:00 AM

Bonjour, I see you are already savoring the day, and I have yet to have my coffee:) Amitiés

Chris Green
Date: 5/25/2017 9:17:00 AM

Well, what are you waiting for? :) Thanks my friend, that means a lot that you came to read me before you've had your coffee...I like that. :)

Tim Smith

Date: 5/25/2017 7:56:00 AM

The flavor of love...I better have a Mentos first...lol

Chris Green
Date: 5/25/2017 9:16:00 AM

Yeah, they do come in handy at times. :) Thank Tim.

Darren White

Date: 5/25/2017 7:07:00 AM

What a tasty way to wake up this morning :) But what on earth are creamscle bars? I always dream of the mocha eyes of my boyfriend! Lovely Chris.

Tim Smith
Date: 5/25/2017 10:46:00 AM

The have different flavors now...dreamsicles were my favorite

Chris Green
Date: 5/25/2017 9:16:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend and I see Tim has answered your question sort of, allow me to embellish...And orange flavored popsicle with a vanilla ice milk center. We called them "dreamsicles" as kids.

Darren White
Date: 5/25/2017 8:53:00 AM

Thanks Tim :)

Tim Smith
Date: 5/25/2017 8:00:00 AM

A flavored popsicle with an ice milk center