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Last winter it was i clearly remember ending of August beginning September The kids were in bed when I heard you come in the stench of alcohol the clanging of tins You came up the stairs trying to find me the dirt from your boots covering the carpet I tried to hide in the closet holding my breath the thud of your step shaking the doors The doors rattled becoming unhinged the creak of the wood making me nervous We both know whats about to happen the raise of your fist hitting my face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/3/2009 10:39:00 AM
thanks sara appreciated love, amy-eve
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Date: 11/2/2009 1:23:00 PM
I hope that this is a topic and not fact. If fact get a plan and get out. Nicely done I felt the fear and was ready to jump from a window. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/1/2009 5:00:00 PM
Refreshed after an extra hour of sleep I feel pretty good today. So I am going to be reading some exceptional poems today. Thank you for sharing yours with us Amy. Enjoyed this read. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2009 2:52:00 PM
much love to you. x
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Date: 11/1/2009 5:21:00 AM
A powerful (and tragic) piece of writing...only cowards beat up women! Wecome to the Soup...looking forward to reading more - Tim
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