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The Fisherman's Wife

The surf pounds against cliff I beat my pillow moaning you are gone, your heart of stone not swayed by my tears onoko*-san the bringer who has seeded my garden return like the sea otter through the waves to me The conch shell echoes your name you are spirit born, deck lifted I have burnt incense for you do not haunt my shoals * Three Dodoitsu's which tell the tale of LOVE meant to be sung. onoko is the Ainu word for man comprised of 3 syllables “o”, “no” and “ko” which refer to male and female sexual organs. EXAMPLE for my contest

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Date: 1/13/2014 9:43:00 PM
WHOA... AWESOME--PLEASE XCUSE CAPS. LONG STORY.. I READ 9 OF YOUR WONDERFUL WORKS OF THOUGHT. YET, I CAME BK TO THIS BEAUTY. IT STILL AMAZES ME IN A WORLD OF BILLIONS X EACH INDIVIDUAL WITH A MEGA DICTIONARY OF THOUGHT AND WORDS , THAT A LONE SOLITARY INDIVIDUAL CAN PUT TOGETHER STRINGS OF BEAUTIFUL EXPRESSIVE WORDS THAT TOUCH THE SOUL. & CREATE THOUGHT THAT CHANGES EACH TIME THE WORDS ARE READ. PS: THANK YOU FOR COMMENTING ON MY WORKS ROCK SCARFONE GOLDSMITHWORKS...
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Date: 8/25/2013 9:12:00 AM
Wow! Intense spiritual work! Deb! jimbo
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Date: 8/20/2013 5:29:00 PM
No, I seriously thought it is an oldie from you.Soupmail.
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Date: 8/20/2013 2:03:00 PM
Good one! i think I have read it before?
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Date: 8/20/2013 6:56:00 AM
I like this Dodoitsu. As I recall, this form can be extended to read like a long poem. I saw many versions where they were not even divided into stanzas, but I think it doesn't matter. Great example!
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Date: 8/15/2013 8:32:00 AM
God one! I don't know this form, but I will look it up. And thanks for the explanation... Jack
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Date: 8/14/2013 3:45:00 PM
You pull from so many venues of inspiration. This is very sensual and just awesome ... :)
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Date: 8/13/2013 8:06:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your love tale dear lady..Its sad and beautiful....I do hope many will.participate in your challenging contest.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 8/13/2013 8:50:00 AM
LOL Sara..you know..they were NOT explicit but I bet we could guess 2 of the parts?
Date: 8/13/2013 7:23:00 AM
Great job..What does each syllable mean in that word?...Educational..Enjoyed reading ..Sara
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