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The First Time I Saw You In a Dress

I touch your face in the casket and feel the bone just below. Soon you’ll be a skeleton in a blue dress and the smile I loved since birth will peek at me between the aisles of Walmart around Halloween. It will be your new face, come October I’m not sure how long it takes but once I close the lid you’ll never be the same. I shouldn’t have come because this is how I’ll picture you now and it doesn’t even look like you. I’m asking you to haunt me, like you promised. You said when you die I’ll feel you in the breeze but it’s March and the wind is cold.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/21/2016 12:08:00 AM
nice to see this one again, Chase...skat
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Date: 6/3/2014 1:55:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup, Chase. This is a powerful poem you have written and I am assuming it is about someone dear to you. Here's hoping you enjoy getting to know people in this community, Keep writing and enjoy reading the poetry of others. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Date: 5/30/2014 11:26:00 PM
Chase,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/30/2014 7:41:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Chase :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - Well done !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/30/2014 7:01:00 AM
a lovely poem welcome to poetry soup look forward to reading more of yor poems
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Date: 5/30/2014 2:06:00 AM
Chase, a very nice poem, and epic, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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