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The First Time

THE FIRST TIME his spoken words that special night so long ago ‘I want you and need you in my life—never fail to remember this moment as an eternal display of how I find absolution in your body and soul’ bodies embraced warmth on that cold night swiftly elevating to burning passion and desire moonlight spilled through the frosting window as he entered her gently with tears in his eyes their rhythm held a natural exquisite beauty a parallel ebb and flow of tides as waves swelled drawing her yielding body firmly against his taut in unison they touched star crescendos pinnacles for both of them - the first time- an eternal love cemented in their bodies and souls everlastingly cruel life paths wrenched soul mates unity apart but treasured memories remain bonding hearts © Kim van Breda—May 2014

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Date: 5/26/2015 8:54:00 AM
That night was painted beautifully by this Poem.. Beautiful Write Kim, Enjoyed reading Line from line...
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Date: 5/30/2014 10:48:00 PM
Wow, that was very very very beautiful!
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Date: 5/27/2014 10:07:00 PM
Sometimes memories are all we have. Touching and powerful write! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/22/2014 8:03:00 PM
A passionate write Kim....I like the crescendos line...
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Date: 5/22/2014 1:22:00 PM
Beautifully expressed; romantic and sensual with a final touch of sadness. The memory of "the first time" stays forever within. Deserving of a top rating:) // paul
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Date: 5/22/2014 12:25:00 PM
Hi Kim, this is very sensual, romantic and extremely well thought out, an excellent image, thanks for your kind words, hope you are well my friend....David
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Date: 5/22/2014 12:04:00 PM
Beautiful, i wish i knew such love, blessings Carl
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Date: 5/22/2014 10:52:00 AM
- A wonderful poem - so real and romantic .... a meeting that should never be forgotten. - Soon weekend ... hope your weekend will be fine, dear friend Kim. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/22/2014 10:08:00 AM
What a beautiful expression of your love...how delightful... Hugs Tim
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