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The First Time

The first time I saw you Was writing a love haiku A rose in the morning dew I wished had been a Vishnu. The first time I heard you. In my ears words echoing, soft coo My whole body lusciously imbue Heart and soul your love pursue. The first time that day in July Something inside went deliciously awry Stirring, life adorning chi With love couldn’t but comply. The first time I saw your smile Loving, devoid of guile The world I left for a while Back I am from a dry exile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/6/2010 11:36:00 PM
nice use of word andi, enjoyed readin it.... cheers oscar
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Date: 6/5/2010 9:37:00 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"...
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Date: 6/5/2010 9:36:00 PM
A wonderful passionate poem on love. Nice images
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