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Below is the poem entitled THE FIRST TIME which was written by poet Andi Abderrahmane. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The first time I saw you
Was writing a love haiku
A rose in the morning dew
I wished had been a Vishnu.

The first time I heard you.
In my ears words echoing, soft coo
My whole body lusciously imbue
Heart and soul your love pursue.

The first time that day in July
Something inside went deliciously awry
Stirring, life adorning chi
With love couldn’t but comply.

The first time I saw your smile
Loving, devoid of guile
The world I left for a while
Back I am from a dry exile.

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  1. Date: 6/6/2010 11:36:00 PM
    nice use of word andi, enjoyed readin it.... cheers oscar

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 9:37:00 PM
    So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"...

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 9:36:00 PM
    A wonderful passionate poem on love. Nice images