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The First Love I Lost

You where the first love i lost So it was you who taught me how to be strong You where the first that left without goodbyes So it was you that taught me to not waste any time You where the first one that left such pain so it was you who taught me of how much i can love I never looked up to the sky so much till the day you left our side You was the one that taught me how to pray every night i would tell you about my day You was the one that taught me nothing stays the same I was only 12 so it was you that taught me what growing up was all about You taught me of how short life can be So because of you i treasure everything that means so much to me And its you who taught me that when i have to let go I don't have to lose though i cant live without because there has always been apart of you with me And when i think back to those days i owe so much to you because giving me the best of you is what saw me though

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/19/2015 10:16:00 AM
This is deep, it's never easy to let go. Cloe, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/18/2015 10:33:00 AM
Cloe, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/18/2015 2:47:00 PM
Hi Skat, thank you so much for the warm welcome, I have a feeling i will make great friends here one of which i hope will be yourself. i dunno what to say really i'm 23 i live with my partner and my 2 beautiful girls. And i really just want to share my poems with the word. Thank you for taking the time to leve me such a lovely message speek soon :)

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