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The First Gift

Christmas is a time for giving. Christmas should be a whole lot more. A time for loving, time for living A time the Christ Child to adore, To shout His name from shore to shore. God sent his Child, his own dear Son, And angels sang, the tale to tell. First Christmas gift for everyone Ring loud, ring long, the Christmas bell. The Christ has come on Earth to dwell. His birth, though happening long ago In humble manger lined with hay, Still puts a very happy glow In human hearts on Christmas Day. God sent him forth our sins to pay.
December 2, 2011 Won 2nd place For contest (English Quintain)

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Date: 12/19/2011 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your super 2nd place in Francine's "English Quintain" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/18/2011 2:50:00 AM
Congrats Joyce, so warm so sincere. harry
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Date: 12/18/2011 2:26:00 AM
A sacred quintain write and an even more awesome win. Congrats...it sounds so much like an old Wesley hymn. It brings music to my heart. Gwendolen
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Date: 12/18/2011 12:17:00 AM
I just knew this would do well.Congratulations, dear.
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Date: 12/17/2011 9:07:00 PM
wonderfully penned quintain, love the flow and the rhyme and the message, congrats on your second place win Joyce
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Date: 12/2/2011 9:14:00 PM
Joyce. your quintains address the meaning of Christmas with great charm. This is sure to be a TOP winner. Very nicely done. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/2/2011 6:32:00 PM
thanks for entering my contest Joyce ( p.s. I love it)
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