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The First Date

She was the first to disappear Behind the mannequin in "Quirk", And he, from the cretaceous year Followed like a Rex in dark. She swallowed a tranquillizer And that was showing on her cheeks pink like a shade of amber, and dear She was blushing like critics. It could be any of those, In this world at the moments Who carry forward the legacy of prose Of first daters with comments. We change rooms every hour; And in the first we never take a cold shower. A first date - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty 10th Feb, 2018

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Date: 2/14/2018 7:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Rajat!.. Happy Valentine's Day Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/14/2018 7:51:00 AM
I'm impressed with the way your approached the prompt. It was a delightful read. Congrats on a fine piece.
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Date: 2/14/2018 6:56:00 AM
congrats, Rajat.
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