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The Fire and the Flame

The Fire & The Flame Intoxicated mind, head mind games, here is the theme in inebriated shame. Panicking, restless, exotic little lame, Art Decos in silent echoes take the blame. Thoughtless printed portrait, brown leather frame, Uncontrollable turmoil captured trained tame. Then misery struck and all of evil took its aim, all that's left my nemisis is not the fire just its flame. bmdavey@ 02/12/16

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/13/2016 6:38:00 PM

Brian, well expressed. The rhyme has a flow that gives the poem a straight read. Thoughtless printed portrait, I like the hint of alliteration on that line. ;) Happy Valentines to you..... XOX ~Love LINDA~

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/17/2016 12:05:00 PM

Hi Brian, you are very sweet.... thank you for the kind reply to my comment. Have a nice day. LINDA

Brian Davey
Date: 2/15/2016 12:08:00 AM

Thank you for your input it makes me happy when I hear positive comments from you. HAPPY VALENTINES DAY TO you too

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/13/2016 8:36:00 AM

Well written Brain...^WW^

Brian Davey
Date: 2/13/2016 5:52:00 PM

Thanks for there comment and don't worry about the Brain thing it has happened a gazillion times throughout my life.

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/13/2016 8:41:00 AM

Sorry I meant Brian...damn keyboard...^WW^