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The Final Ride

He sat straight up in the saddle, tired, no sweat left in him as he hadn’t drunk a drop for days. The white salt ring left on his skin and the horses neck were crusty, itchy, stale smelling. He was tough as weathered leather, taking his last ride, the last mile, the last day, saying goodbye as he rode away. He was no slouch, he would sit straight up until he could no longer hold his head. The horse collapsed, dead from exhaustion, dehydration, refusing to leave his life long companion. With a snap, the rope tightened as the cowboy fell towards his horse, the final ride over, his final prayer answered, to ride forever with his friend. created 16 Jan 2019

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Date: 7/31/2021 11:35:00 AM
Aha! "Ghost riders in the sky!"
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Date: 7/31/2021 5:57:00 AM
This is beautifully narrated writing with a very friendly as well as satiric theme.
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