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The Final Goodbye

She watched him sleeping, wondering When did she stop loving him Was it gradual Did she ever love him Could she love another Her mind was made up She would leave tomorrow He watched her sleeping, wondering Placing the pillow over her face Did he ever love her.

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Deb M

Date: 3/1/2023 5:21:00 AM

Oh my Paul….l didn't expect that ending….nice little surprise there!! Enjoyed…Debx

Paul Bell
Date: 3/1/2023 7:17:00 AM

Was a rather quick end.

Valsa George

Date: 2/27/2023 3:26:00 AM

As both of them were unsure if one loved the other, it is better that they go their different ways. There is no heartbreak or regret .... ! Without love there is no point in being together. Thanks Paul for your kind visit to my page.

Paul Bell
Date: 2/27/2023 4:28:00 AM

Thanks, Valsa. Some just should never be together.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/20/2023 3:59:00 PM

Quite a startling twist! The thoughts people have are sometimes terrifying. One is left wondering why? What drove him to this? Powerful imagery.

Paul Bell
Date: 1/21/2023 2:57:00 AM

Some relationships sure are toxic.