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Two faced fox from beneath the shadows Prepackaged blush the manipulative wallows Irrational cupidity earthed in lies Imminently causing fitting cries Acute observations to every detail Questions asked but to no avail Reprehensible plight wears temperance thin And convincingly accounts for the insurmountable win Clarity of worth is only there in the lack of Contradictions and assumptions strikingly thereof In effect attempts are marked as feeble Noteworthy endeavors deemed as terrible Given that honesty less jest were sought If only beyond the bridge were given thought Contexts beyond the cusp could have been prevented The discussion ends when this poem has ended

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Date: 12/23/2009 3:19:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Rob and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:26:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 1:46:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Rob! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:07:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:38:00 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Rob. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 11:59:00 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured Rob >> James
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Date: 11/30/2009 9:42:00 AM
Rob, Congratulations on your feature this week. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/30/2009 5:49:00 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 7/22/2009 7:41:00 PM
great rhymes. good job!
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