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The Final Battle

Hand on hat,scarf wrapped tight Black brolly angled low; Each step a battle won. A frail determined figure On this year's reunion. Face down in the mud He was later found, A note clutched in death's grip "Better to die upon your feet Than to live upon your knees" No-one remembers why No epitaph they wrote Yet engraved thereon ..his final note.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 11/15/2019 10:54:00 AM
Brian, wonderfully penned and so emotional and visual, well done !
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/15/2019 11:18:00 AM
Cheers Constance have a creative weekend of poetry

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