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The Figure Skater

One day Good day Young girl Sweet girl Who dream Not scream To be And see Herself Not shelf Fulfilled Not chilled Tumble Not fall Jump high Aim high Gyrate And skate To learn Not spurn Toe loop Not hoop Flip jump Loop jump To flip And skip Upright Spin right Then edge Not wedge Half turn Not burn Biellmann Spin wan Lutz jump Not hump Lay back Not sack Spiral Tidal Axel So well Twizzle Dazzle Camel Not swell Salchow And show Quick toes Strong toes Brave heart One heart Skating Swirling With pride Not hide A dream That stream And seen On screen Skater Blazer Bow... Wow!

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Date: 4/3/2023 6:20:00 PM
Wow, this was fun to read. I was a figure skater when I was young, so I could relate to this one. As I read, I could see the skater on the ice. This poem has motivated me to write a footle I'm not so sure I will be quite as successful. I loved your lines " Twizzle Dazzle" So sparkly.
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Clifford Villalon
Date: 4/3/2023 7:06:00 PM
I like skateboarding too. You are a masterpiece, Miss Marikate! Figure skating is a very dangerous sport. Highly commended, but takes a lot of hard work. On your part, I believe it's not that hard having the experience early in life. I'm privileged for your visit today. Strength to you and stay inspired! Thanks again. Cliff

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