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The Fight of a Lifetime

It would be fifteen rounds against the longtime champ, But I was an upcomer, ready to make my stamp. With an undefeated record, he was well renowned. I was in good shape, with low weight, hoping to be crowned. In the first round, I came out fast, full of fire and fury. Throwing lefts and rights, my opponent I would bury. He didn’t seem so great, not much of a force at all, Yet, as hard I hit that guy, I could not make him fall. In round 3, he landed an upper cut to my gut. I was badly reeling, while he still remained uncut. In round 4, he hammered me with a hook to the head. Some reporters in the stands wondered if I was dead. It looked like it was over, after he knocked me flat. Just before the bell rang, I staggered up off the mat. Dazed and confused, I continued to attempt my best. This guy was relentless, as he put me to the test. I was getting tired and decided to fight him smart. I chose my punches more carefully than at the start. At the end of the fourteenth round, I was still standing, But I was a mess, from the beating he was handing. Next round, I asked, nearly falling, without being hit, Could I fend off blows, win points, would the judges permit? No sir, I was knocked out cold, couldn’t be reheated, And once again, Father Time remained undefeated.

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Date: 4/21/2024 8:31:00 PM
'Father Time' stands still for no man, not even for David Crandall. A classic write, methinks. Thanks. Enjoyed it greatly. ~ Gershon
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David Crandall
Date: 4/21/2024 9:40:00 PM
Thanks Gershon! I have a good friend, and he's always saying, "Father Time is undefeated". I should dedicate this to him.
Date: 4/21/2024 4:34:00 PM
wow! Wasn't expecting the opponent to be Father Time. Fabulous ending and a metaphorical write and read. I re-read your poem once I embraced the metaphor. I'd like to thing that as we progress through time that we chose our punches more carefully than at the start. Well done! Have a pleasant Sunday evening, Sara
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David Crandall
Date: 4/21/2024 9:39:00 PM
hi Sara, thanks! Interesting to hear how you experienced it. I was thinking just that, before I sent it, that the reader would be surprised at the end but wouldn't be able to appreciate the metaphor prior to the ending, not yet knowing it's a metaphor. So, I was thinking, hmm, maybe this has to be read twice :-)
Date: 4/21/2024 1:05:00 PM
Hi David, Your poem made me feel the intensity and struggle of a hard-fought battle, with each round reflecting the perseverance and courage needed to face life's toughest challenges. The powerful imagery of relentless blows and staggering resilience resonates deeply, ultimately reminding us of the inevitable triumph of time. Enjoyed it. Until the next round, Don
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David Crandall
Date: 4/21/2024 9:32:00 PM
Thanks. I appreciate your comments, and glad you liked it. Sometimes, life feels like a fight!
Date: 4/21/2024 8:42:00 AM
Brought back memories of years ago when me my brother and Dad would get up at an ungodly hour to watch Muhammed Ali (Cassisus Clay as he was known as then) retain his title. An enjoyable read David. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
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David Crandall
Date: 4/21/2024 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Tom. I was never a big boxing fan - except when I was in 6th grade when they had the first Ali/Frazier fight. I was really into that one. Also, I remember my dad taking me to a fight on closed circuit TV, I think it was Ali/Jimmy Ellis. Have a great rest of the weekend!

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