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The Fetish

There are some souls made of alabaster, not hard as diamonds, but enduring stones. Who is surprised if years later the little fetish is just as the man carved her, not more or less. He took the stone fragment in hand, shaped the marble with his diamond blade into something like, but quite unlike what she was before his knife. She fit in the palm of his hand. He left her on a shelf by the door.

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Date: 7/10/2008 10:11:00 AM
Barbara, what a fasinating poem. Excellent writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2008 11:03:00 AM
Hello Barbara The imagery in the wonderful poetic write is quite strong! Nice job! Enjoyed much. Look forward to reading more of your beautiful writing in the near future. Love Light Truth Patricia
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