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The Ferris Wheel

I was young So I got married on a ferris wheel And round and round and round we went In circles I was foolish Ferris wheels take you nowhere Other than the highs and lows of life Love has a way of spinning you around The Ferris wheel of love Tossed me to the ground Joined the circus of loneliness Saw you in a dream Travel to far away places To look in the mirrors Of martini bars Saw a phone on the wall So I just called To say I love you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/4/2016 4:55:00 PM
Oh wow... this was great... shoot I need to read you more of your older writes! These are great :)
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Date: 5/28/2013 10:18:00 PM
Loved it my friend ....Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/21/2014 10:56:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/26/2013 9:48:00 AM
Beautiful written poem Arthur ! - Thank you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/25/2013 11:14:00 PM
Great metaphor! I liked the unpredictability of your imagination... it's the little things in life that make up the bigger things... sweet and endearing ending!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/21/2014 10:56:00 PM
Hi Timothy, better late than never, I missed this one, must have been riding Ferris Wheels!!! cheers mate

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