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The Feeling

the feeling is bittersweet the flux of rapture and melancholy shadowing each other like the shaded sections in diagrams of spheres and prisms yet not so obsolete dashing in like a flash flood a wild bronco of a storm it leaves you slightly overwhelmed like a tree pulled from its roots by the wind in this moment there is nothing there a cold stalking silence of perception it is neither a cage nor prison but neither is it home i wrap it around my metaphysical from like a silk scarf to my physical only deceiving myself with the carnal temptation of its pleasure always ending on a sour note like the ill composition of an unwanted acquaintance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/26/2015 1:13:00 PM
Taylor, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/24/2015 1:48:00 AM
Thank you guys for the compliments, they are appreciated. I hope to bring as much light and love to you fellow artists as I know you will bring to me. To sharing creativity and expression!
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Date: 8/23/2015 11:30:00 PM
:) SKAT
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Date: 8/22/2015 11:42:00 PM
Taylor, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/22/2015 11:14:00 AM
nice one have a great day
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Book: Shattered Sighs