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Many people fear unnecessarily due to some imaginary notion of others they have. Doubt puts us in such terrible fear.  Being a victim of this kind of fear, I am inspired to write this poem.

One man tall and lanky Was walking side by side Of another short and stocky None other was in sight Their stare became lengthy The lanky saw his pocket buldge Of fear he stayed stacky A pistol was what he judged The stocky noticed the folded hanky That could endanger his life As he took it for something fishy Like it resembled a hidden knife The lanky reached a protective hand On the well wrapped red hanky His wages he had in a rubber band He wanted to save from the stocky The stocky feared theft of his burger In terrible fear his gaze ran at the lanky Like an ominous bell they stepped farther Focussed in false notion of robbery They wished for the cloak of the night They could escape with their treasure For the lanky, money was tight And the stocky had it for his dinner Their steps were growing strained And their breathing became raspier Not one word to each other was said Till the end when their fear drained

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/28/2019 12:25:00 AM
Prejudice is what consume all our good sense...inculcating negativity in our life...fear of being g robbed/cheated/deceived is mingled. You said it so humorously. Enjoyed reading.:) Sunita.
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Beejadhur Sewumber
Date: 1/28/2019 5:19:00 PM
Thank you Sunita. We all go through it sometime in our life.
Date: 1/12/2018 6:03:00 AM
I need your Smile by Poet Bijadhuur Sewember is a poem with clear thought without any subtlty or doubt in simple words and expression. Aju Mukhopadhyay
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Beejadhur Sewumber
Date: 1/12/2018 11:05:00 AM
Thank you Aju. I need your smie,too.
Date: 1/11/2018 7:10:00 PM
Fear is something which if not contained will in time hurt us. Nice write.
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Beejadhur Sewumber
Date: 1/12/2018 11:06:00 AM
True dear Carlos. It does hurt. Thanks.
Date: 1/11/2018 6:59:00 AM
This is excellent... well expressed..
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Beejadhur Sewumber
Date: 1/11/2018 9:30:00 AM
Thank you, my friend.
Date: 1/10/2018 8:19:00 AM
I love your work sir
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Beejadhur Sewumber
Date: 1/11/2018 9:31:00 AM
Thank you dear collins
Date: 1/9/2018 9:25:00 PM
Wow, you have so much fear to write about.... Enjoyed, reading you today. Looking forward in reading more... linda
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Beejadhur Sewumber
Date: 1/10/2018 6:35:00 AM
Thank you, my friend.
Date: 1/8/2018 12:56:00 PM
Hello my friend, I just read your poem.As I read your poem,it made a lot of sense to me.It spoke the truth. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/9/2018 1:28:00 PM
I do agree my friend. Have a nioce day my friend.
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Beejadhur Sewumber
Date: 1/8/2018 4:56:00 PM
Thank you dear friend. Fear is in our imagination.
Date: 1/8/2018 7:26:00 AM
This is such a unique creation...very well depicted!
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Beejadhur Sewumber
Date: 1/8/2018 10:01:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend.
Date: 1/8/2018 12:32:00 AM
I love this, this is so very true how we wrongly judge.. and it goes on daily. Beautiful write thanks
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Beejadhur Sewumber
Date: 1/8/2018 10:01:00 AM
Thanks, my fiend.
Date: 1/7/2018 10:47:00 AM
I like your poems; the classic verse that you have crafted. Salute!
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Beejadhur Sewumber
Date: 1/8/2018 12:03:00 AM
Thanks for appreciating my poems, dear friend. Thanks for following me.

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