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The Fate of Future

THE FATE OF FUTURE A romp of childhood, descending my steep driveway, to the bus. My urgent path lit dimly, filled with compacted snow, shoveled with steel blades. I wearing a woolen coat, always late. Still on time, before great big wheels grind down a country road. Youth, with hair still damp, long and fine, shyness hides inside. Tired teens, all around me, I watch the wipers swipe morning flurries. The repetitive motion, bestowing comfort, like a lullaby - before the din of crowded classrooms and impertinent teachers. My math teacher, with a schnoz that crests Everest, an informer of intelligent students. Less inclined to teach her fearful ones, to shame us with a shun. A glare of eagle spectacles, nearly scorning our dark plight. Yet, classrooms with nouns, adjectives, verbs spur me on to serendipitous highs. I fly with Kilmer, dip with Plath. I lean forward as psychology and sociology take me by the arms. I feel the fate of future, the lovely breeze has dried my hair, sublime. 9/5/2017 Non Rhyming couplets

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Date: 10/14/2017 3:33:00 PM
I find this poem interesting. A discription a time in the past during a season of winter flurries. A feeling of country living growing up. Interesting. Here we are today. Nicely painted.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2017 6:29:00 AM
Thank you, Michael! So glad you enjoyed.
Date: 9/6/2017 3:56:00 AM
Fantastic couplets, the enjambment works wonderfully here. "Fly with Kilmer, dip with Plath" is a wonderful line.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2017 7:08:00 AM
Thanks so much, Darren! <3 Kim
Date: 9/5/2017 6:02:00 PM
A nostalgic write...nicely done Kim...god bless...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2017 7:27:00 PM
Thanks, my friend! <3 Kim
Date: 9/5/2017 3:06:00 PM
Lovely story from the good old days--well written, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2017 7:27:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay! <3 Kim
Date: 9/5/2017 2:00:00 PM
A very poetically interesting flashback, Kim. Who we are now is always in part from who were were back then. Mighty fine poetry ... very creative too. Love and joy always.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2017 7:28:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 9/5/2017 12:17:00 PM
You have penned a beautiful poem here my friend, Kim. Your gem flows eloquent and well written. Thanks for sharing.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2017 12:26:00 PM
Thank you, Afolabi! I really appreciate it! Trying out writing in with a slower pen. <3 Kim

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