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THE FATE

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THE FATE

Fading memories 
Forgotten past 
Frozen mind and spoiled dreams 
I feel to hear the bells of death 
The chariot of God driven by white horses 
Started the journey 
Who will cry? 
Who will put a wreath? 
Who will fire my funeral? 
Who will put a light in my graveyard? 
Who will dismiss my ash in a holy river? 
I do not know 
That is the fate of a lonely man as me 
That is the fate of a lonely man as me. 

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  1. Date: 6/28/2012 7:23:00 PM
    OH MY! I can TOTALLY understand how loneliness can do this and that is what makes this poem so REAL. It just doesn't feel like enough to be ALIVE but not LIVING. Terrible terrible feeling. If this IS how you feel, I hope for better days sooner than later <3

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany
    Date: 6/28/2012 9:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for your kind words .jk
  1. Date: 6/27/2012 12:24:00 AM
    each to his own funeral gift, the hook will give my bones a lift, at the university... or so my old mate says of he:) i have threatened to steal him off the hook:) police might think it kind of crook, jail time for little me?

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany
    Date: 6/27/2012 7:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you .jk
  1. Date: 6/25/2012 5:07:00 AM
    The poem with deep meaning. Well penned. Tfs

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany
    Date: 6/25/2012 7:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you .jk
  1. Date: 6/24/2012 4:51:00 PM
    Jay, your ending repeating lines,, gave me a frown... i think you can't base your fate on today or tomorrow.. ... thanks for sharing your poem, always~PD

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany
    Date: 6/24/2012 8:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you .jk
  1. Date: 6/24/2012 11:59:00 AM
    jk. - My last poems title : "It is never too late" - - - "fly where you want....fly ....." - oxox Anne-Lise (hope you like it)

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany
    Date: 6/24/2012 8:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you.jk
  1. Date: 6/24/2012 6:09:00 AM
    Powerful write! Enjoyed the read! Lori

    chakrapany Avatar jayachandran chakrapany
    Date: 6/24/2012 8:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you .jk
  1. Date: 6/24/2012 3:25:00 AM
    Very sad, but not too late. Go out and do some good deeds for those who will remember you as the kind person you are and who will truly miss you when you are not here. Make good friends. You don't have to rely on relatives - - well that is what I've found in life. When you are dead it is too late.