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The Fatal Blow

Through the cracks i seen Her shadow She was brushing her hair in front of the mirror I heard whispers coming from the adjoining section So it caught my attention and brought me closer In that shadow that is as dark as a cesspool I felt something evil over there and lurking Then i feel this chill and a presence behind me And it was hard to accept because no one sneaks up behind me Then there was another appriation under the painting of her mother It was completely different any from the others The swoosh of a hawk is how the next scene is depicted The dark shadoe suffered the fatal blow of the Holy Spirit Now she smiles at her own reflection Im like how did I ever end up in this position If it aint observing the phenomenon then its researching life of my unborn person Because i am just a spirit stuck in between lightness and darkness I can never comp[letely remember this past life that i have lived here Here comes the preist He is currupted by the devil Here comes the joker And God says he is chosen There goes the palace dog he is barking at me and growling Im like dog why are you the only one who can see me She starts singing the most loveliest melody I can feel only for a brief moment then i feel nothing It is true that the spirit world is where souls despair and are lonely Are we Gods Angles or are we really the demons She sings these three notes Please dont be lonely Im like i think other than the dog your the only one that knows me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/4/2012 3:19:00 PM
Interesting work..Sara
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Date: 10/2/2012 7:30:00 PM
Hi Timothy, a very deep image on the fatal beginning ,,, your are very perceptive here with your poem... this line of yours stands out the most,, " I can feel only for a brief moment then i feel nothing" even though I'm a female I can relate to that... love the blow you inhibit.. xox~pd
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