The Fat Kid and the Little Kid

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Children have relationships adults cannot fathom. Being bullied could be for some, better than being ignored. When the bully in the process of his actions is killed, it could solve the problem for both parents.

They buried the FAT kid today. The little KID cried. The parents of both kids just smiled. “Isn’t it a pretty day?” They asked each other. The voice of the Clergyman droned on.

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Daver Austin

Date: 7/18/2016 12:01:00 PM

I was a fat kid. wasn't it nice that even skinny kids liked fat kids and little kids were too little to have been body-ruined. I don't think fat kids like themselves, and aint that a shame. Congrats, daver