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The Fast

I will not eat tomorrow For this holiday, I fast. The reason why is that it’s my Connection to the past. I’m not hung up on sinning, So atonement’s not my goal. I worry not that I’ve a blot On my supposed soul. Yet since I was a child, This one custom I observe; Thus history, to some degree, I manage to preserve. Tomorrow I’ll be hungry, But at night I’ll be released. What I love most – we’ll raise a toast And dig in to a feast!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/26/2012 11:18:00 AM
Very clever in-line and end-line rhyming and impeccable cadence! Your content made me chuckle... even though it's been a while, I can always come back to your pages and find humour, pathos and technical brilliance!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 9/26/2012 4:46:00 AM
It's 5:00 in the morning, I'm just trying to give you warning. I'm only up because I couldn't sleep. So if I say something stupid, like maybe I saw cupid. Well there you go, I shouldn't make a peep. But I like your poetry so much. Your rhyme and meter and such. You might just have to personally bleep. ;)
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Date: 9/25/2012 10:17:00 PM
I love the rhyme and meter of your poem. And the humor in it. I must not forget to mention that. What a fun poem. I love the last two lines of the second stanza. I try to read poems from as many poets as I can but I have my favorites, you are one, that I keep coming back to. Great work.
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Date: 9/25/2012 3:06:00 PM
Very nice,Ilene..This reads like it should be read by all each year. :o)
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Date: 9/25/2012 2:40:00 PM
Well said Ilene
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