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The Farmer and His Corn

The Farmer and his Corn Snug and warm beneath the earth The field awaits the coming birth It holds the richness that they need Provides the anchor for the seed The farmer by his hand did sow Soon he knows his seed will grow When length of day and rain is right And sun above shines warm and bright The rain has come the soil is moist New life burst forth, it has no choice With a sudden wondrous surge A field of green does emerge The farmer feels it in the air He comes to see his field so fair Quietly, just after dawn His brand new field of corn is born Quickly grow those humble shoots Drawing goodness through their roots All hot and hazy summer long The shoots thrust upward, straight and strong Golden now as flaxen hair New seeds upon them they do bear The farmer picks an ear to eat To check then that, his corn is sweet The farmer comes to field one morn Another with him that day drawn No face had he and yet was grim The corn all knew that it was him A shrouded hood, his face to hide He follows just two steps behind The mice whose nests the stalks had borne Know soon there will be no more corn Not daring now to take a peep They know for them they’ve come to reap Both the men they carried scythes They know they’ve come to end their lives The farmer lifts the implement To cut them down is his intent A shadow fell, with mighty stroke The farmers gone, with man in cloak.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/20/2018 11:24:00 PM
Loving this top poem of yours again. Now let me see the last listed on your best list
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Date: 12/16/2017 7:35:00 PM
Coming back to your best poem ever. And I see you took my advice because I do not see anything wrong with Stanza 8's line three any more!
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Date: 12/16/2017 7:35:00 PM
Merry Christmas to you, from Petal!
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Date: 7/6/2016 5:22:00 PM
Hmm, I still ponder this one, Richard!!! Came to tell you it is your number one poem at Soup. Did you know that? Also I am returning the spell check favor. I happened to see on going through this, stanza 8 line 3. Check it out!
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:28:00 PM
I like it but the rhyme scheme takes away from the depth.
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Date: 7/16/2015 12:34:00 PM
This piece of work is awesome.
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Date: 7/15/2015 2:57:00 PM
A wonderful poem Richard! I really admire the way in which you wrote it, it's as though I can see each moment play out as I read; extremely captivating -and gives me a new appreciation for corn! Well written Richard:) Kind regards Faaiqah.
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Date: 7/14/2015 9:55:00 PM
Bright start and a dark finish. Great verse, Richard. Well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/14/2015 1:21:00 PM
Richard: Being an Iowa (Corn State) "townie" this poem had special memories for me. I especially liked the twisted finish. :o) Well done my fellow writer. I will be reading more of your work later today. oldbuck
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Date: 7/14/2015 1:05:00 PM
Very captivating writing. (It's not 'corny')Farmers in my family linage would know in their hearts its tribute. Thanks much.lol
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Date: 7/14/2015 12:46:00 PM
Hi Richard: a beautiful poetic tribute to the growing of the the corn and to the Grim Reaper.
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Date: 7/14/2015 12:37:00 PM
You should look into getting a combine. :) A very enjoyable read Richard. Good day.
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Date: 7/14/2015 12:27:00 PM
Death waits on no one..Enjoyed reading your very creative poetic work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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Date: 7/14/2015 9:39:00 AM
Nice work poet!
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Date: 7/14/2015 9:27:00 AM
I am new to your poems but I like what I see. I too am a rhythm and rhyme poet and it is good to see others in that vein. I did notice a few lines that dropped the rhythm and one or two that dropped the rhyme but the story was great and your really captured a picture. Mike
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Date: 9/8/2013 10:43:00 AM
Richard, you have well documented a season in the life of sustenance. Great creativity.... Thanks for your kind comments on my posts..... Jake
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Date: 8/29/2013 2:30:00 AM
well written
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Date: 9/4/2013 5:32:00 PM
Thank you Splat III
Date: 8/26/2013 5:25:00 AM
There is a season for everything. You carried me right through the season of growth to the twist at the end. Wonderful poem
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Date: 9/4/2013 5:31:00 PM
Hi Monterey, Thank you very much for this sweet comment
Date: 8/24/2013 6:07:00 PM
we certainly "reap" what we sow. favorite verse: "Golden now as flaxen hair New seeds upon them they do bear The farmer picks an ear to eat To check then that, his corn is sweet" ~lovely
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Richard D Seal
Date: 9/4/2013 5:30:00 PM
Thankyou Lori, I'll look in on you
Date: 8/17/2013 8:07:00 PM
This is really nice poem Richard, but whats with the end ? Is this Jeepers Creepers movie,,,you have a great day ;}
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Richard D Seal
Date: 9/4/2013 5:29:00 PM
Hi Debbie, Up to you to make of it what you will, Thanks for the comment and you have a great day too
Date: 8/13/2013 2:36:00 AM
- A intresant poem / story .... very well written !!! - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/16/2013 6:13:00 AM
Hi Anne Lise, thank you for the nice comment, all the best to you too
Date: 8/12/2013 6:17:00 PM
I agree with everyone else Richard..awesome poem...switching effortlessly from nature to reaper!..was mesmerized...my favs too...and thanks for your kind visit...
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Richard D Seal
Date: 8/16/2013 6:11:00 AM
Hi Donna, and thank you for your kind visit and words :)
Date: 8/12/2013 3:15:00 PM
methinks this is an allegory of the grim reaper! and we be those poor corn stalks!! I enjoyed this one, and the descriptions reminded me of these days back in Iowa when we went down row and row of corn, detassling all the stalks. One thing I do NOT miss from my childhood! One of my summer jobs!
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Richard D Seal
Date: 8/15/2013 4:44:00 PM
I'll leave to mull on the content Petal, least it's reminded you not to apply for that job again.
Date: 8/12/2013 9:59:00 AM
looks more than a scarecrow to me, richard.. a wonderful storyteller you are... tis is amazing!..) huggs
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Richard D Seal
Date: 8/15/2013 4:40:00 PM
Thank you Nette, that's a wonderful compliment
Date: 8/11/2013 9:23:00 PM
Mr Seal....what an usual topic! Tending the corn now, are we? I'm with Licia on this one...the flow and rhyme scheme are great. Good one!
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Richard D Seal
Date: 8/15/2013 4:31:00 PM
Thank you Mrs Ghali, lots of people say I'm corny lol so I do tend to tend this virtue lol
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