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The Far Blue Mountains

The far Blue Mountains call to me Begging me to take flight Desert below, hear my plea It is my wish to fly to thee I see them in the dying light The far Blue Mountains call to me I will make it there, this my decree I would go this very night Desert below, hear my plea They are as far of as I can see And truly a glorious sight The far Blue Mountains call to me It is my wish to fly to thee Desert below, hear my plight Desert below, hear my plea When I’m there I will be free Flying to their magnificent heights The far Blue Mountains call to me Desert below, hear my plea. ~9th Place in the "Villanelle Me" Contest by Dr. Ram Mehta~

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Date: 7/6/2010 7:34:00 AM
My congratulations on your 9th Place Win in the contest, Tirzah! Beautiful and a pleasure to read. Peace, love, audrey
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Date: 7/3/2010 12:49:00 PM
hey hun, a great entry and a worthy win. Enjoy your winnings. keep up the great work. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/3/2010 9:38:00 AM
Beautiful Villanelle , Tirzah, Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/3/2010 6:47:00 AM
Congrats Tirzah on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's contest ..what an awesome write and win for u.. this is magnificent..my dear friend.. enjoy your victory dance and success.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii... watching fireworks... AlohA
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Date: 7/2/2010 11:21:00 PM
Congratulations, Tirzah on your poem's success in DR Ram's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/2/2010 10:44:00 PM
Congrats on the 9th place win in my contest
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Date: 6/7/2010 9:34:00 AM
I see the weekend brought a lot of inspiration to all PoetrySoup Poets. I enjoyed reading you poetry today Tirzah. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:51:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest
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Date: 6/6/2010 4:41:00 PM
Interesting compostion using the Villanelle form...Good luck in the contest...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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