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The Family Submarine

“Yes” here we go Dangling to and fro In the midst of a sinking submarine Taken is our right A future of constant fight Still we all pull together as a team In the midst of a sinking submarine Forth and back Bobbing so slack As if awake in the centre of a dream The seas full lashing Awaiting of the crashing So we all pull together as a team In the midst of a sinking submarine As air becomes less On each other we must rest And all pull together as a team In the midst of a family submarine! JD www.readmypoetrynow.blogspot.com/

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/9/2009 7:16:00 AM
Together will stand… this piece is absolutely amazing. A mixture of passion and dreams. There is need for us all to be steadfast and ready to fight for our right. Freedom does not come on a platter of gold. You are great. Keep writing. Adeleke
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