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The Family Portrait

They stand together in a family portrait. In it's surroundings of designer valance curtains, a bed appears in one corner while in another a dresser. Together they stand Mother, Father and Daughter. Each looking in different directions: Mother looking down, proud, but not at daughter. Daughter looking upwards to Heaven and father looking straight out. They're dressed: Mother in a shiny suit, father in suit and tie. Daughter in all white dress with veiled flower headdress. White shoes, knee-length stockings, and gloves. This is a Confirmation Affair. But with everyone looking in different directions, and not at each other, how can one tell it's a family portrait for a special day. How can one tell love?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/14/2015 1:39:00 PM
its the differences that keep families strong....we all have something to offer all along....looking in different directions is an artistic delight....good work ms Williams, I enjoyed this write....;)
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Marilyn Williams
Date: 10/14/2015 1:43:00 PM
Thank you for your poetic comment.
Date: 10/13/2015 2:29:00 PM
I rather enjoyed your poem, Marilyn. Nicely expressed! :) john P.s A Seven for original thought.
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Marilyn Williams
Date: 10/13/2015 3:39:00 PM
Thank you, John so much. And a grade to match.

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