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The Fallen Temptress

To live without the fear of falling sleep and love enough to chase the night away, eyes drift across the darkness where she lay befriending dancing shadows as she weeps. Awake another night beneath dim stars once bright enough to shine through flesh and bone. The sky like death’s tomb buries her alone not long enough to reach the light afar. Then golden auras lift to burden breath with shallow gasps, she faints into sunrise. Alone again, no soul to hear her cries or feel her pounding heart before her death. And who will come to rescue her from sleep if nightmares wrestle dreams as stillness comes? No faith or love, her lonely heart succumbs to bitterness that flows from oceans deep. Her beauty had once glowed behind her eyes and softened all the edges of her face. Not long ago, she charmed from star’s embrace. Now, she, the temptress, falls from timeless skies. The glories of the past are hardened earth and stars burn out then cease to light the sky. Fated to fear the dark and surely die alone, she mourns her youth of selfish worth. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 12/12/14 for Giorgio's Iambic Verse - Sketch a Fictitious Character - (Top Gun Poetry) - Poetry Contest *form - Iambic Pentameter

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Date: 12/26/2014 9:22:00 PM
Hello Rhonda, once again..., CONGRATS on your win, in Giorgio A. V's contest... Take Care ~LINDA
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Date: 12/16/2014 7:59:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/16/2014 3:28:00 PM
congratulations on this win Rhonda , your so talented and great asset to your readers
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Date: 12/16/2014 1:36:00 PM
A giant is always a gaint,no doubt you are a Poet of great repute Rhonda,congrats on this great win...huggs
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Date: 12/14/2014 6:47:00 PM
Beautiful and skillfully fashioned!
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Date: 12/13/2014 4:14:00 PM
I was tempted by the title and not disappointed - good luck! hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 12/13/2014 12:03:00 PM
You rock -- what a great poem -- drama and sadness mix with the never ending time that brings all of us to our humanity. Outstanding, 7.
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Date: 12/13/2014 10:06:00 AM
Rhonda you are great "And who will come to rescue her from sleep/ if nightmares wrestle dreams as stillness comes?"-a great line..enjoyed it thoroughly. Marry Christmas Rhonda.Hugs! ...rajat
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Date: 12/13/2014 1:51:00 AM
Very, very, very good!!! :) john.
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