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The Fall of the Winter King

The Fall of The Winter King He had risen to power fueled by a vicious and ruthless determination to reclaim a lost throne. His tactics had stunned the unsuspecting, laid barren the fields, blanketed the forest, silenced the sounds of life itself. A dictator, seeking no counsel, accepting no offers of surrender, driven by the desire to destroy the kingdom that had usurped his throne. Rumors spread of a daring bud – sprouting - a tune hummed by the imprisoned trees adrift on the whipping winds of war in defiance of the heartless king. A call to arms sounded by the most gentle, the most delicate. The first acts of open rebellion, The resounding crack of the ice jamb the aching roar of the river’s rage surging over its banks awakening those still held captive. Slowly the insurrection took root buds gathered in hidden clusters, trees quietly bloomed muffling the screeching gales, offering safety to bands of rebels. Flocks of warblers met - feathered archers - hurling their darting arrows against the glare of a cold king’s horror. Sweet grasses spread across the brown, despoiled fields - a verdant gauntlet tossed in the face of dread. Flowers crept from thawing dungeons waving their colors, swarms of banished pollinators followed the call to duty. The ebb and flow of battle - frosted retreats, clandestine sunrise maneuvers. The resurgence of heart, the growing hope of warmth. As memory of the chilled repression faded preparation was made to receive the beauty and bounty of a new and peaceful King. John G. Lawless 1/11/2015 For SKAT’s Winter’s End – Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/6/2015 7:20:00 AM
Congrats John on your win :)
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Date: 5/5/2015 7:15:00 PM
Love your take on this, John! What a battle you describe! Thank good newss the "new and peaceful King" finally wins each year! Congrats on your fine win. 7+Fav, Sandra
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Date: 5/5/2015 3:08:00 PM
John, Congratulations in "Winters End contest." Have a nice day. LINDA
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John Lawless
Date: 5/5/2015 5:18:00 PM
Thanks Linda, always nice to hear from you.
Date: 5/5/2015 10:58:00 AM
John. Congratulations <3 thank you 4 supporting my "Winters End" contest. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/5/2015 5:18:00 PM
My pleasure SKAT, and it was a winter we never thought would end. appreciate the time and effort you put into the contest that allow so many of us to play
Date: 1/14/2015 3:39:00 PM
John this is a spectacular write. A fav for me. I am convinced this will do very well in the contest.
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Date: 5/5/2015 5:16:00 PM
Maurice, thanks for the fav and it did place well in the contest.
Date: 1/12/2015 4:31:00 PM
You have a great command of vocabulary in this descriptive poem. Very well done. A 7 from me!
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Date: 5/5/2015 5:15:00 PM
Thanks Laura, I sorta fell way behind this one with follow up. Appreciate the high mark.
Date: 1/12/2015 7:17:00 AM
hey John love the write, very imaginative and well written,keep me wanting more as I read,good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/5/2015 5:14:00 PM
Robert, this one got lost in the 9.5 feet of snow i was shoveling. A belated Thanks for your comment. As I found out today it did place in the contest.

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