The Fall

Call me Call me now Let me hear your voice As I fade from the site of you Let your words dance over my heart Come and kiss this last romance Heart to heart Lips to lip Lets us linger in a long last kiss All our loved ones end up dead Let us entwine in a lovers twist Waking up to a morning mist Expose your breasts upon my chest Call me now

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/19/2014 6:43:00 PM

This is such a beautiful, romantic piece, Arthur with superb imagery! You just know how to articulate loving emotions in a wonderful way! I just love it! Pandita

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 10/9/2014 8:18:00 AM

Very romantic Arthur...I hope she calls too! I love your short but powerful write :) Ana

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/11/2014 6:35:00 PM

Well if she calls you, just take down the message for me ok? LOL :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/9/2014 1:23:00 AM

A very sensual and romantic write, Arthur. I can feel the depth of longing in your words. I hope she will pick up the phone and dial....

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/11/2014 6:34:00 PM

I am such a dark poet, I dont have a phone! :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/7/2014 1:15:00 PM

Wow, such a passionate mood you create, Arthur! I'm calling - can you hear? Sadly, it is true that our loved ones "end up dead," but the way they touch our hearts will never be gone. A very romantic write! If for Justin's contest, he is sure to love this. Love, Carolyn

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/11/2014 6:33:00 PM

I can hear for sure, that you always have kinds words and praise for many here, and its much appreciated! Now really, I had no idea Justin Bieber was here!!!!