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This poem is about the depression phase of the bipolar cycle. It is accompanied by another poem titled "Flight," describing the manic phase.

For the "Under the Influence" contest
 Jack Jordan
Stumbling in low darkness I fall against that damp brick wall, my every surface rubs grime and slippery. I roll bug-like into myself, a vain attempt to protect what hope or dignity I have left. This poem is about the depression phase of the bipolar cycle. It is accompanied by another poem titled "Flight," describing the manic phase. For the "Under the Influence" contest Jack Jordan

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Date: 3/14/2013 5:29:00 PM
Congratulations Jack...hope you are happy today...Donna
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Date: 3/14/2013 8:47:00 PM
Thanks... It's been a good day. Fortunately, it's rarely as dark as the poem. Jack
Date: 3/13/2013 6:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win:) I can identify with this poem very much...
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Date: 3/13/2013 9:53:00 PM
Not too much, I hope. It's not a good place to be. Thanks for the congrats. Jack
Date: 3/13/2013 5:43:00 PM
Hello Jack. your poem is amazing! I love it;-)! Congratulations on your wonderful win in Nathan's contest~ always*LINDA
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Date: 3/13/2013 6:04:00 PM
To be honest I'd lost track of entering the contest. I'm mighty happy that you pointed it out! And thanks for your great comment. Jack
Date: 2/26/2013 10:08:00 AM
I love this dark place you've created in your poem...some of us know it all too well...great job!
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Date: 2/26/2013 10:24:00 AM
Yes it is dark there sometimes, although not as often as in the past. Thanks for the reply. J
Date: 2/26/2013 8:53:00 AM
Hi Jack, there is nothing wrong with falling. I fall all the time. We just get up and keep going. Have a great day. Lucilla
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Date: 2/26/2013 9:26:00 AM
That is the answer. Thanks for reading. J
Date: 2/25/2013 11:46:00 AM
Ah Jack it's always a cert, that when we fall someone is watching...David
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Date: 2/25/2013 12:01:00 PM
Always, I'm afraid. J
Date: 2/25/2013 10:50:00 AM
Very sad...smile and climb
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Date: 2/25/2013 11:28:00 AM
It's the only thing to do. Thanks for reading. J

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