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The Fall

When I gave you my love, I gave it my all. When I gave you my heart, I was afraid of the fall. Now as the clouds Pass me by, Knowing my fate, I understand why. The climb I made Was worth this landing The thing I neglected Was Preparing. When I hit the bottom Shattered pieces of me Scattered across, As far as I could see. I lay here broken, Trying to heal. So truly thankful That I can feel. And now here I am, And there goes my life. But for what we had, Baby...I'd fall twice.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/9/2010 7:54:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Heather. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2010 11:39:00 PM
Wonderfully expressed
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Date: 2/8/2010 7:56:00 PM
Heather, Your ending really had me smiling. It is amazing how the heart can heal after being broken into so many pieces. I enjoyed this amusing write. If it is for the contest, best of luck. Blessings, Connie
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