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The Fairies In the Enchanted Garden

This is a story of the fairies so sweet that live and played in my garden so neat out of view from prying eyes they hide playing away they can't be seen by me or you as they frolic and dance all day in the sun picking pretty flowers all day one by one making posies to put in their silken hair to please the Queen of Fairies when she next visits for fun. It is a beautiful place full of wonderful things and it has pretty fairies with gossamer wings . The colors of these shine gold in the sun Everyone of these fairies sparkle flying around and look like sparking gems when they touch the ground. If you' re very quiet and don't make any noise at all then you might see the smallest fairies that live there Tinker Bell and Dew Drop cuddling up behind the tall wall. These little fairies are so scared of us all seeing them there They feel save in their homes here behind this big wall their away from big people because fairies are very small. They can feel protected as they try to stay safe and warm all cuddled up together trying to sleep safely behind their wall. No one even knows that they're homes are there hidden away So if you don't tell anyone that you know they dwell behind there they will live happily and peacefully without ever having a care. If you happen to see this big wall when you walk down the street Where these two little fairies live with the other fairies so cute. Try to remember not to make any loud sounds when you pass by because fairies scare easily and you might make the little ones cry. if you were sleeping and something scary went by,you would cry too. please if you're lucky enough to see Tinker Bell and Dew Drop there walk past softly because they might be asleep right then and don't make noises and wake them up as fairies like you need sleep too.

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Date: 3/27/2016 5:25:00 PM
Very nice
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Date: 3/25/2016 12:29:00 PM
I will tiptoe and whisper when I visit your garden and I will so much enjoy seeing the little ones. This is precious. Congrats, daver
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Date: 3/25/2016 12:16:00 PM
cute poem very nice and congrats on making front page news
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Date: 1/9/2016 4:19:00 AM
Greetings Pam. I'm amazed by your key hole-shaped verse. It's design and shape really enchanted me. Congrats for having your piece featured in the Poetry Soup home page!!! ;-)
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Date: 11/14/2015 9:14:00 AM
Pam :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 9/4/2015 11:22:00 PM
Well-rhymed and beautifully written. However, here are some suggestions. Third stanza: "No one even knows that they're homes are there hidden away". I think it should be 'their' and not 'they're'. "So if you don't tell anyone that you know they dwell behind there". Is 'that you know' really needed? "make noises and wake them up as fairies like you need sleep too". Comma after 'fairies' and after 'you' would make for better reading.
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Date: 9/4/2015 5:50:00 AM
Hi Pam, This made me wish I was still a little fairy going to sleep...and makes me think of my little fairy as when I put her to sleep. Very beautiful indeed. Love the enchanted garden. Love, Nyonglema
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Date: 6/12/2015 1:21:00 AM
Pam, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 3/26/2013 2:08:00 PM
Dear Pam,Congratulations on YOUR POEM "The Fairies In the Enchanted Garden" being Featured.I will walk softly and queitly through my Garden's this year. I don't want to make little Fairies cry. Superb Pen. I am part of a Prayer Group that meets at my Cabin every Tuesday, YOU are now on the Prayer List. May the Almighty watch over YOU and grant YOU a long Life. I'm going to YOUR Website to hopefully read some excerpts of "An Enchanted Garden" I will be back to read YOUR Poetic Tapestry soon With
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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 3/26/2013 2:09:00 PM
LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
Date: 11/20/2012 6:40:00 AM
Always a delightful subject Light & Love
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Pam Woolford
Date: 11/25/2012 12:09:00 AM
Hi Debbie. Thank you for your lovely comment. I totallywith you I have just returned from a cruise around Australia. Unfortunately I got very sick and had to disembark when we docked in Adelaide where I spent six days in a Private Hospital. It was very disappointing for me and my husband but thank God we had good travel insurance. Hope to talk again Debbie. Thanks Pam
Date: 4/15/2012 5:58:00 PM
Pam congratulations on your featured poem, it is a Wonderful poem about the fairies in the enchanted garden, your poem was very imagitive, your verses illustrated every detail and it was if I was actually there and I will remember about the big wall and not to disturb them. (smile) I enjoyed reading this poem.
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Pam Woolford
Date: 4/16/2012 5:52:00 PM
Thank you for these lovely favourable comments about my poem. I have actually had a book I wrote based on this poem as well Shirley. love Pam xx
Date: 4/15/2012 2:26:00 PM
Congratulations on our poetry being featured this week Pam. Love, Carol
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Pam Woolford
Date: 4/16/2012 5:55:00 PM
Thank you very much. Could you please tell me please where do I find poems that have been featured? I would be most grateful. Pam xx
Date: 4/15/2012 7:02:00 AM
What a lovely beautiful spirited poem. I enjoyed reading it very much.
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Pam Woolford
Date: 4/15/2012 12:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Karen.. I am still recovering from a very big operation on my cervical spine (neck) I had complications with my breathing which necessitating being on life support. I am lucky to be alive. God bless Pam x
Date: 4/13/2012 9:08:00 PM
A delightfully written bit of whimsy. Congratulations on being featured this week, and on an excellent piece, also. - Chuck
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Pam Woolford
Date: 4/15/2012 12:16:00 PM
Hi Chuck, I enjoyed writing this poem and because of the lovely comments I received I have even turned it into a children's story book. It is my very first one. I have written two others which I have on my website pamschildren'sbooks.net. I would love you to have a look and see what you think. Pam x
Date: 4/13/2012 7:03:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poems...Patrick
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Pam Woolford
Date: 4/13/2012 5:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Patrick. I have also written and had published a book based on this poem. Thanks Pam
Date: 9/14/2011 8:32:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Pam. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Pam Woolford
Date: 2/10/2012 6:42:00 PM
I appreciate your nice comment.I won't repeat all I've just said but you'll see about poem up above on comment for Vie. Love Pam x

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