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The Facts About Time

The Facts About Time I told my friend who is across the Atlantic in Italy, and I tell her it's the land of "my" people.....on my mother's side I told her "I have a poem in me" and I do but it's 1 o'clock on a Saturday the sun in shining so warm now yet here I am. Indoors, like someone super glued me to this chair until I give birth to this poem like it hurts ....this racing mind and as usual I'm thinking about Time backwards it's "Emit" which means "to produce" or.... "come out with" ! backward or forwards it's "Time to come out with" questioning my own time here "Will my dreams come true"? or is this IT? nevertheless, I feel strongly.... that I will forever have a Poem in me.

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Date: 4/19/2016 11:45:00 PM
Barbara Suen, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/17/2016 12:39:00 AM
Dear Barbara, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
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Date: 4/16/2016 2:47:00 PM
Barbara Suen, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Barbara Suen
Date: 4/16/2016 3:30:00 PM
I really don't know what I'm doing, or if posting correctly, when next to my submitted poem, it reads 5 comments...but there is only one. and do I press "export Poems"? I guess I'll just take it slow....I mainly write prose... might need some help here !!!!

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