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The Face of the Earth

Am I the only one who doesn't care it's raining? That it's cold outside and no one's on the street When the wind is blowing a hundred miles an hour And the earth decides to shake its fist at me When the elements electrocute my senses And lightning carves the sky with angry streaks When flying branches shatter picket fences And thunder gives an awe inspiring speech When the water that surrounds me churns and vomits And the shoreline has no choice but to retreat Not a morsel of my soul is craving shelter I choke on rain and plant my stubborn feet This is the fragile life that we inherit These are the numbered days that mark my place The Earth can be so damn intimidating But I'm happy any time it shows its face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/6/2012 1:51:00 PM
I love everything about this poem - the rhythm, the word choice, the rhymes. Awesome job! Officially faved.
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Date: 11/23/2012 8:18:00 AM
written with such beauty and truth. Love it. I liked they way you gave life to the element and with gave your poem quite and eadge.
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Date: 11/16/2012 5:45:00 AM
"The earth can be so damn intimidating"... sure ain't just whistlin' Dixie, my friend! Well crafted... cheers!
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Date: 11/11/2012 3:47:00 PM
kyle, i like happy thoughts, indeed I love your poem~SKAT~
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Date: 11/4/2012 11:12:00 AM
A great poem here kyle!Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 11/4/2012 11:11:00 AM
i like the reflective feel and depth of this piece, kyle.. everything tends to point at an inner rambling... superbly woven!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/4/2012 10:05:00 AM
This is exceptional Kyle, I admire your spirit. I imagine your family to be afraid for your safety. Well written poem, I very much enjoyed. I had to get a towel to dry myself after reading it.
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Date: 10/30/2012 6:45:00 AM
THE FLOW WAS BEAUTIFULLY CARRIED THROUGH . LOVED THEME AND ALL THE CONCERPTS INCLUDED. *SMILES* RON
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Date: 10/28/2012 7:38:00 AM
STUNNING PERCEPTIONS AND VIBRANT ANALOGIES KYLE IN THIS TREMENDOUS WRITE LUV .. I ESPECIALLY AM DRAWN TO SECOND VERSE .. WE EXPECT 'SANDY' TO BRING ALL U PENNED THIS WEEK ..
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Date: 10/26/2012 7:25:00 AM
What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Kyle. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX
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