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The Fabulous Me and The Resentments

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The Fabulous Me and The Resentments

I've toured the world and lived life hard,
Sordid tales I can not hide.
I've logged some miles,they're on my face
And in the baggage by my side.

I've made poor choices in the past.
Tried hard to let memories go.
But sometimes scars don't fade away,
They stay to help you know.

Every day my satchels packed,
Carrying acts that need repentance.
Swinging on the shoulders of my all girl band
The Fabulous Me and The Resentments.

I Carry With Me....    Contest

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  1. Date: 5/5/2013 7:52:00 AM
    Good morning, BRENDA, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful day. Always & Forever! **LINDA**

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 11:21:00 AM
    Brenda, enjoyed your humor in your all girl band, kudos for your honesty.

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 2:13:00 PM
    I'm sure your music would be an enchanting mixture of blissful cries and terrific transition Brenda; strings wings and flings - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 10:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Brenda. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 10:39:00 PM
    Brenda,the 'Dusk' was fabulous and now this,,has emerged in splendor.. loved how you presented the feel ...and "logged some miles they're on my face",finest of connotations..pleasure to read .Many Congratulations on your well deserved 1st place, gautami

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 5:54:00 PM
    Nice rhymes - good poem. Congrats on the win

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 9:57:00 AM
    Nostalgic-sounding poem and top of the mountain this day! Congrats for affixing a huge pink bow around this poem with the last line. A real show stoppper! Great job for the fabulous poet who deal well with her resentments! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 7:52:00 AM
    This is FABULOUS, Brenda!! Seriously, I am so glad I caught this one in the winner's circle. You have written a introspective gem of honesty....things we all carry, but sometimes hide away from our own eyes! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 7:02:00 AM
    Congrats Brenda on your magnificent first place with this equally magnificent entry luv.. enjoy your top spot win...

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 6:55:00 AM
    This is a wonderful write Brenda.Congrats on your 1st place win.(I think the FORM is RHYME)

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 5:26:00 AM
    Congrats on well deserved 1st place win!!!!!!

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 11:10:00 PM
    Congrats on your first place win! :o)

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 10:29:00 PM
    scintillating, brenda... my best Congrats for topping this! :) hugggs!

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 9:22:00 PM
    Very Good. Congrats.

  1. Date: 5/12/2011 6:01:00 PM
    An honest confession and atonement, Brenda

  1. Date: 5/12/2011 5:02:00 PM
    Very creative work that reads like a winner..Good luck in the contest..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the comments on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 5/12/2011 7:54:00 AM
    Thank you! From me and the girls!

  1. Date: 5/12/2011 7:52:00 AM
    What a wonderful and lovely write, it is written so well, best of luck to you in the contest. Caryl

  1. Date: 5/12/2011 3:44:00 AM
    a gripping yet beautiful expo of emotional baggage , brenda.. we all have it and your internal musings fascinate me no end.. winning luck to you! :) huggs, nette

    Atry Avatar Brenda Atry
    Date: 5/12/2011 5:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Nette. You are always an inspirational voice. I wish that I had more time to spend with the community, and getting to know my fellow poets. I know that you and I could be wonderful friends.