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The Fabric of Summer

With melancholic fortitude I suffer Summer's threadbare wane Though just a stitch of Autumn's gown Shows through these tepid, shorter days The weave of sultry memories Drapes warm nostalgia on my heart I'll wear this paling green till frost 07 Sep 2019

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/7/2019 9:15:00 AM

It is difficult to let go of the warmth...I'll wear this paling green till frost...lovely line.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/3/2019 6:33:00 PM

I love this, the imagery and content speak to me with poetic skills that engage and fulfill in delivery. A wonderful gem! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/13/2019 7:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your win David...your second line is my fav.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/13/2019 5:55:00 PM

Congratulations, David!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2019 4:58:00 PM

wow, David. It's always so good to see your work when you pop up on a contest list. you never disappoint .Congrats on the well deserved win

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/12/2019 12:47:00 PM

- Goodbye Summer .... and congratulations on your winning poem, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/12/2019 11:33:00 AM

yes, i really felt the pinch of your poetic mood and expressive language, david!...thanks for gracing my contest and big congrats!...huggs

Lonna Blodgett

Date: 9/12/2019 9:20:00 AM

Beautiful wording so well penned. Congrats. Lonna

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/12/2019 8:20:00 AM

Congratulations and this is a wonderful poem. Blessings

John Lawless

Date: 9/12/2019 7:36:00 AM

...a stitch of Autumn's gown....Damn that is good David....A poetic painting to hang in the corner of the mind.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/12/2019 5:33:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on your win!;)

John Gondolf

Date: 9/12/2019 4:24:00 AM

Congrats on your first place win for this beautifully written piece, David. John

Wendy Watson

Date: 9/12/2019 4:15:00 AM

It's no surprise that Nette, was also enraptured by your wonderful poem,David. Congratulations!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/9/2019 10:18:00 AM

this is one of the best i've seen so far for the contest; i love the whole fabric/clothing idea because it's a very original take on the theme - good luck in the contest but i don't think you'll need it!

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/7/2019 8:31:00 PM

This was simply amazing! Wow! Lol I guess I should bow out of the contest gracefully! Truly was an amazing write I won't say good luck in the contest because it is s top place winner!;)

Wendy Watson

Date: 9/7/2019 10:43:00 AM

This is so cleverly constructed,David. I love the 'clothing' theme woven throughout with verbs and nouns and the title is a perfect fit. Some wonderful 'touches'. I really enjoyed reading it.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/7/2019 10:36:00 AM

Very nice! :)