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The Eyes of Life

UNSUPPORTED CODE MY EYES DIFFERENTLY THEY SEE, THEY SEE IN CONTRAST WITH OF THOSE WHO ALSO SEE, SEE ME NOW A SECOND CHANCE OF HAVING SEX. I'M NOT TRYING TO BE BETTER, BUT I WANA DO SOMETHING BETTER, DRIVING YOU OUT OF THIS TUNNEL OF DEATH, KA THE SMALLANYANA PASSAGE , VISIBLE TO THOSE WHO WANT TO SEE, AND INVISIBLE TO THOSE WHO EVADE. I....I GO BY THE NAME MUSIC DIVINE THE BEST RHYMER OF THE VOWEL 'I'... I, I BETTER STRUGGLE TODAY AD ENJOY TOMORROW FOR TOUGH TIMES DON'T LAST BUT TOUGH PEOPLE DO LAST. AND THESE ARE THE EYES OF LIFE CAUSE I CAN SEE AND FEEL THE WAY I EXPRESS MY HUNGER TO SUCCESS! FOR SUCCESS IS MY ONLY OPTION AND FAILURE IS NOT.

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Date: 1/19/2016 7:20:00 PM
ENJOYED READING THIS AGAIN
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Date: 10/7/2014 4:42:00 PM
Thato, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:08:00 AM
Thato, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/5/2014 12:01:00 AM
A very deep powerful piece - well done! Welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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Date: 10/4/2014 1:38:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Thato- A good start ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/3/2014 7:20:00 AM
THIS IS WHEN I WAS STARTING!
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