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The Eyes of a Father

So we look back We count the days, the nights, the weeks and months Just one blur of emotion Count the raindrops And you count the memories All raining from the same cloud The eyes of Time himself We build our homes Then tear them down with the lives of our children And put our tears away In jars that we carry on our backs Along with the stones in our hearts And the only gateway to ourselves Is through the eyes of Time himself In the sigh of a father In the smile of a lover In a tear of the soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/9/2009 10:27:00 AM
beautiful. speaks directly of your soul. with this we can see a portion of how you think and feel. great job. kind of reminds me of the Trail Of Tears. --Raiin
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Date: 9/26/2009 10:57:00 AM
Mahmood, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/25/2009 12:22:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 5:39:00 PM
Touched me deeply! Best wishes through to the next round. Lainie
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:47:00 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2009 3:05:00 PM
Hey, thy theme, thrust and tone teaches... You are such a wonderful poet. Please keep writing and congratulations on your awesome piece being featured this week. You are great
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Date: 7/9/2009 11:22:00 PM
Mahood, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/9/2009 8:30:00 AM
Very beautiful write here, Mahmood and a well-deserved selection to be featured this week. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/9/2009 5:21:00 AM
Nicely written. Sara
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Date: 7/6/2009 12:19:00 PM
Interesting reflection Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 7/6/2009 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem>>James
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Date: 7/6/2009 9:26:00 AM
The emotions comes through your words in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/6/2009 6:00:00 AM
Excellent writing. Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2009 11:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your displayed work this week. More success and God bless. Ernilando
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