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The Eyes Have It

Some are ever hollow Some are full of lies Some are evil; menacing Some are old and wise Some are full of mischief Some are full of fear Some are deep and soulful Others full of tears Some are ever roving Some are ever cold Some are ever staring Some are even rolled! Some are ever flirting Some are green or blue Mine are eyes That can’t disguise The love they hold for you

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 12/23/2020 1:44:00 AM

yes; just beautiful the poem is; I enjoyed this really ///

Gayle Rodd
Date: 12/23/2020 2:52:00 AM

Thanks so much!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/17/2020 10:21:00 PM

Simple yet beautiful write, Gayle, touching:)

Gayle Rodd
Date: 12/18/2020 8:49:00 AM

Thank you Jo

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/15/2020 10:35:00 PM

What a pity you stopped writing. Hope to see you here once again tough things have changed. ~~

Silent One

Date: 10/25/2020 1:43:00 PM

Hey long time no see.. hope you are well

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2020 3:45:00 PM

this is so adorable, Gayle. I love this

Running Wolves

Date: 12/8/2019 2:49:00 PM

This is incredibly fantastic

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 5/28/2019 6:45:00 AM

Beautiful ...

Gayle Rodd
Date: 5/31/2019 5:48:00 PM

Thanks so much

Ricky Muse

Date: 12/9/2018 9:09:00 AM

This poem covers a lot of ground. Very nice.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/2/2018 6:48:00 AM

A really super piece on the eyes Gayle, lovely rhyme and flow too. Superb!!

Gayle Rodd
Date: 11/2/2018 7:29:00 PM

Thanks for readi.ng ;)

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 9/17/2018 6:03:00 AM

Mine are eyes That can’t disguise Yes indeed eyes that disguise are no eyes, and you have eyes that knows. I liked the poem

Paul Callus

Date: 9/10/2018 2:21:00 AM

You have eyes for eyes, Gayle! A poem wrapped in simple words, and that makes it even more delightful. Regards // paul

Charles Messina

Date: 8/29/2018 6:47:00 PM

Beautiful love poem you’ve written, Gayle. Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. Very well done...warm wishes...Charlie:)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/20/2018 8:48:00 PM

They say that if you look at the eyes you can catch a glimpse of the soul. I think this is so true. Wonderful feeling to be able to look into the eyes of someone you love. There is no greater feeling, I have enjoyed your poem this evening Gayle. thank you for sharing

Gayle Rodd
Date: 7/20/2018 9:46:00 PM

Thank you so much!

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/20/2018 1:30:00 AM

Beautifully creative and delightful poem to read my friend. Perfect ending for such an uplifting and well crafted piece! A fav...

Gayle Rodd
Date: 7/20/2018 8:31:00 AM

Thank you Robert :)

Maria Williams

Date: 7/19/2018 10:50:00 PM

How beautiful, I love the way you have written this. A Fave for me....Maria hugs

Gayle Rodd
Date: 7/20/2018 8:32:00 AM

Thank you Maria!

Michael Wegman

Date: 7/19/2018 7:12:00 PM

How wonderful! And clever. Thank you, this made me smile big! The ayes have it! This one’s a keeper! Be blessed! M

Gayle Rodd
Date: 7/19/2018 9:36:00 PM

Thank you kind sir!

Pat Adams

Date: 7/4/2018 5:38:00 PM

The word play title, the very good rhyme and a sweet surprising ending. I love it! A FAV for me!!...........Pat

Gayle Rodd
Date: 7/19/2018 9:36:00 PM

Thx Pat

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/2/2018 8:50:00 AM

Enjoyable to rad again. Clever play on words with the title.

Gayle Rodd
Date: 7/20/2018 8:32:00 AM

thank you Richard

Lyric Man

Date: 6/8/2018 5:25:00 AM

Gayle, oh my gosh.. your fun, catchy poem flipped into a lovely romantic write in three lines.. I love it!

Gayle Rodd
Date: 6/8/2018 7:35:00 AM

Thanks for reading, Chance :)

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 5/2/2018 1:52:00 PM

It is not corny!!! Switch it up again. Gotta go read what I've missed. Enjoyed this one...cause I get really corny in my writes.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/1/2018 12:14:00 AM

This is both clever and sweet. I enjoyed your poem Gayle. Take care Richard.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/20/2018 7:45:00 AM

This is adorable, delightful and as cute as can be. I enjoyed it all, beginning with the title until the last word. It could easily be memorized by any age group and serve as a sing-along or parent to child, not just romantic love (my mind did go there just now). I truly fun poem. All the best ... CayCay

Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/20/2018 6:06:00 PM

Thx CayCay. It's a little 'corny' but I gotta switch things up once in a while ;)

John Gondolf

Date: 3/18/2018 12:26:00 PM

Through the eyes of this reader your poem is a beautiful tribute to the one you love. Nicely written, Gayle. John

Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/18/2018 7:51:00 PM

Thank you John

Fj Thomas

Date: 3/18/2018 8:46:00 AM

Love the title and poem Gayle! You've covered all bases.

Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/18/2018 11:39:00 AM

thx for reading!

Harriet Shea

Date: 3/11/2018 5:39:00 PM

It is all in the eyes. I always look in the eyes of those I talk to. Mirror to the soul. Observation is very important in the life we live Gayle.. Derena

Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/18/2018 11:40:00 AM

I agree. thank you for taking the time to read :)