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The Eye of the Beholder

I sat on the train travelling to my nine-to- five office job passengers on Melbourne trains read or sleep meditate…. or stare vacantly….. avoiding other people’s eyes avoiding conversation avoiding confrontation I sat on the train travelling to my nine-to-five office job a passenger on a Melbourne train and glanced at the blonde opposite homely, plump, jaded, faded a shapeless dress covering her full figure she sat, staring vacantly not reading, not sleeping, not meditating avoiding conversation avoiding confrontation through darker eyes she was a beauty, porcelain-fleshed her face suffused with light luminous waxen-white a moon shining a lamp, candlelit, glowing above a floral-garden-garment ……..a living Renoir a worthy prize

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Date: 2/5/2018 12:55:00 AM
incredible writings Susan..........you choose a topic, which no one ever think of and you did it brilliantly............. Thanks Muhammad
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Susan Baquie
Date: 2/5/2018 1:49:00 AM
Tnank you for your comment Muhammad, it is much appreciated.
Date: 12/11/2016 9:25:00 AM
Superb poetry my friend. You paint with depth and a right fine flourish. A7
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Susan Baquie
Date: 12/12/2016 1:23:00 AM
Thank you very much for your remarks - I am most complimented!

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