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The Existence

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The Existence

An ocean view 
Sudden thoughts of death
Life is given through the form of every breath 
While air has its own properties
With no eyes legs or arms but travels magnificently
Who can realistically imagine the heat the sun gives from such distance
ITs presence, is so divine
Any closer the sun rays can shine 
It ill melt away all forms of life problems including what troubles the mind
Being alive is equipped with all sorts of behavioral tendencies
Plants use oxygen to release 
Water helps rocks increase
Humans rely on each other to teach
Being spiritual has nothing to do with an individual
Through belief faith is formed  
All physical properties witness the external treat of 
"It's Existence"
A Higher Power extremely gifted
Not by a talent inherited only 
Authentic  

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  1. Date: 10/27/2012 8:48:00 PM
    Kamal, very different, human is the word... and i love your concept.... enjoyed your poem* Goodnight! Always~ PD

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 8:59:00 AM
    enjoyed your wonderful poem, love elizabeth