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My name is Paul Carter and I want to tell you my tragic story About the wrong path I chose in life, that wasn't one of glory I was born in the state of Maine in the coastal town of Kittery It was quite a picturesque little town with lovely views of the sea. My mom was an alcoholic and druggie and so too was my dad And a normal happy family upbringing was something I never had I was in and out of state care homes for most of my young life And I got mixed up with street gangs and always carried a knife. I teamed up with a ruthless street gang known as the 'Hun' And it was with them that I first learnt, how to use a gun The cops busted us many times but the charges never stuck We ruled our neighbourhood with fear, that and some luck. One sunday afternoon we got high, on whiskey and cocaine And decided to rob Jim King, the wealthiest man in Maine We checked that our guns were loaded and drove off in our car It was just a forty minute drive to Jim's place, so wasn't too far. We arrived at his mansion and checked no one was around Then we walked up a gravel path making quite a sound We rang the bell twice and then Jim opened the door The four of us rushed in and pushed him, down on the floor. We quickly overpowered him and then tied him to a chair I'll never forget the look on his face, just a frightened stare Then the front door opened wide and in walked his family I didn't realise for a moment things would end so tragically. We turned and fired our guns; his wife and daughter fell dead Jim then managed to break free and I shot him in the head We all ran out of the house, then someone shouted" Freeze" Seems someone had seen us go in and had called the police. An intense shootout ensued and all the gang died except me I was tried for capital murder and the judge showed no mercy All twelve members of the jury had agreed that I was guilty The judge read out the sentence which was the death penalty. In Maine state prison I was on death row, for close on four years And when my time comes, people won't be shedding any tears I'd commited a heinous murder and I didn't deserve to live And if I could turn the clock back, my right arm I would give. I know I'd made many mistakes, I often reflected on my life All I could see at night was Jim, his daughter and his wife I didn't deserve forgiveness, I wrote a letter to Jim's son Told him I needed to pay the price for what I had done. When the day of execution arrived I'd walk with my head high It did not bother me none in the slightest, that I would die Whilst on death row I had found God and I was truly sorry For my actions I blamed no one, no one else but me. Two guards escorted me and strapped me down on a gurney And I realised that for me this was the end of my life journey The prison doctor inserted three lines into my main arteries Then I started to feel quite drowsy and I felt an Inner peace. Through a window I saw the witnesses staring straight ahead And they'd remain seated until the doctor pronounced me dead After about five minutes I was gone, I'd just faded away I was the proof of that saying that crime doesn't pay. Written 5th September 2021.

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Date: 9/30/2021 10:54:00 AM
What a wonderful poem! Your narrations are always unique. I Still remember your detailed description of Jalian-wala-bhag. This is another great narration of yours, Congratulations! .
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/30/2021 10:59:00 AM
Thank you very much Christuraj, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Sadly all to often we hear of cases like that, it's an evil world we live in. Tom
Date: 9/28/2021 6:55:00 PM
Wow! Sadly this is what happens to many kids whose parents don't show them the right path in life. Well done Tom, another excellent read :-)
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Date: 9/28/2021 11:12:00 PM
Thank you Lisa, sadly many see the error of their ways when it's too late. Tom
Date: 9/19/2021 9:27:00 AM
Sir Talent at the helm. Best wishes to my beloved and talented friend. This is what happens to so many,,,it’s awful Panagiota
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Date: 9/19/2021 10:01:00 AM
Thank you very much Pangie, although a fictional write it was inspired by true stories I've read. Tom
Date: 9/18/2021 5:50:00 AM
WoW! Paul, What a well-written story from start to finish. Poor Paul had a rough upbringing; he was looking for the love he didn’t receive at home. The gang became a substitute family for him. I wish he would have found God long before he had walked into big Jim’s house. I’m sure this is all your imagination, but it seems so real. You are an amazing storyteller. Excellent job. Have a wonderful day and weekend- Alexis
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Date: 9/18/2021 8:32:00 AM
Thank you very much Alexis, im pleased that you enjoyed it. It was a fictional write but inspired by stories I've read. You're right though, a shame many don't find God until it's too late. Tom
Date: 9/14/2021 5:33:00 PM
Riveted from beginning to end. A sorry tale, but a fabulous write.
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Date: 9/15/2021 12:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Scott, I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 9/13/2021 12:45:00 PM
I'm sure God forgave him, he admitted his guilt to the law but what counted is that he had found God. I enjoyed your sad tale - but Paul Carter had to pay. hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/15/2021 12:16:00 AM
Thank you very much Jennifer, we all make mistakes in life but we should learn from them or pay the price. Tom
Date: 9/13/2021 12:45:00 AM
What a sad story, Tom! He found the forgiveness of God but had to pay for his crime...
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Date: 9/13/2021 12:49:00 AM
Thank you very much Jo, it's a dark side of our existence, a shame many don't find God until it's too late, how different their lives would have been. Tom
Date: 9/8/2021 6:37:00 PM
Hello Tom ... crikey, what a tale, but a tale that projects the truth about some cities now. These cities are now the jungles that humans should fear - thanks again Tom - Lindsay
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Date: 9/9/2021 2:19:00 AM
Thank you very much Lindsay, it's a harsh reality like you say. Street gangs rule with an iron fist and folks to frightened to speak out as these scum target witnesses families and it goes on. Tom
Date: 9/8/2021 12:37:00 PM
I just plonked both names into the net, amazingly there is a king Jim, and a paul Carter, but, nothing fitted, until I read it was fictional, Tom, it's a good job you don't work for the newspapers, you would have us all believing every word, but, that just goes to show what an amazing poet you are . . . ; )
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 9/9/2021 6:00:00 PM
A book of short stories done in poem would be brilliant, Tom, looking forward to it filling the gap in my bookcase . . . ; )
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/8/2021 1:38:00 PM
Thanks very much Indiana, I always try and get under the skin of whoever I'm writing about and run it in my head like a film then write the script as it were. I'm getting around to the idea of writing a book, it's on my to do list. Tom
Date: 9/8/2021 10:53:00 AM
This is the unfortunate path some take in life due to their circumstances, Very nicely told Tom
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Date: 9/8/2021 1:32:00 PM
Thank you very much Joseph, a bad start in life sends them on a downward spiral. Tom
Date: 9/8/2021 6:31:00 AM
Fiction Tom, yet so much truth, in a generalized way, The poetry is brilliant the flow, rhythm and rhyme superb.
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Date: 9/8/2021 8:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Harry, Im happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 9/8/2021 5:31:00 AM
Great tale told in poetic form. I liked the rhythm, rhyme and flow of your work. Is it based on a true story? Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 9/8/2021 6:21:00 AM
Thank you very much Sara, it's a fictional write, I'm not sure where my muse gets these ideas from lol. Tom
Date: 9/8/2021 5:28:00 AM
Wow. What a powerful story and message!! Well written Tom. I live near Kittery. I hope you have a great day :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/8/2021 6:20:00 AM
Thank you very much Heidi, what a coincidence, I needed a coastal town and Kittery fitted nicely, im sure it's a lovely place.
Date: 9/8/2021 4:15:00 AM
Quatrain is a good form for this style of poetry.Tom,easy to follow
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Date: 9/8/2021 4:27:00 AM
Thank you very much Brian, I'd certainly agree. Tom
Date: 9/7/2021 3:49:00 PM
Tom, you have penned another masterpiece. It is very expressive and realistic. Janice
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/8/2021 12:21:00 AM
Thank you very much Janice, I know some may find parts a bit gruesome but thankfully it's a world we don't live in, but it does exist. Tom
Date: 9/7/2021 2:18:00 PM
WoW! What a tragic story. To bad someone didn't grab that boy while still young and teach him how to be a man. Instead he grew up and got tangled up with criminals. A wasted life. Well done Tom. A well told true story. God Bless, JB
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/8/2021 12:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Judy, sadly we hear of stories like this with many seeing a life of crime as the only way to exist in society, a few are lucky and manage to get out making a good life for themselves. I hope you are well. Tom
Date: 9/7/2021 1:26:00 PM
I wonder of those who say they are sorry if they were magically zapped back at the door what would they do? Sad case, justice served and perhaps forgiveness for a door holder in the kingdom of heaven.
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Date: 9/7/2021 1:30:00 PM
Thank you Kim, like you say they're only sorry when they're caught, they had plenty chances to change their ways. Tom
Date: 9/7/2021 3:05:00 AM
As many said below, I too thought it was a true story ... a sad reality that many children face who grow up to become rogues due to the unhappy childhood they had ... A very good moral story... Have a blessed day dear Tomorrow... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/7/2021 6:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Ani, many see a life of crime as the easy way out and it often ends with tragic consequences. Tom
Date: 9/7/2021 1:48:00 AM
Great write, Tom, one of those that do have it wrong form the very beginning .
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/7/2021 6:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Eve, you're right, many have a bad upbringing and it affects how they'll turn out later in life, thankfully many manage to turn things around. Tom
Date: 9/6/2021 11:14:00 AM
Another great write Tom, I thought this was a true story at first and in a way it is as this happens everyday somewhere. Regret and being sorry always comes after being caught. Emilia.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/6/2021 11:52:00 AM
Thank you very much Emilia, I've often heard of similar stories like that, glad you enjoyed it. Enjoy your week. Tom
Date: 9/6/2021 9:25:00 AM
Not an easy read but it echoes with realistic language as you tell your story...Delice
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/6/2021 10:09:00 AM
Thank you Delice, I tried to convey the dark side of humanity, sadly many incidents like that go on in large cities around the world, gangs are rife instilling fear in neighbourhoods. Tom
Date: 9/5/2021 11:45:00 PM
Captivating story from beginning to end. Simple English, great narration and the message coveyed makes it a perfect story for all . Improper upbringing, lack of values causes crime and in the end we are left with regret which begins after we are caught. I would seriously suggest you write and publish moral value stories poem collection for kids. Many would benefit. Take care, God bless!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/6/2021 2:08:00 AM
Thank you very much Rama, will take your comments on board and give it serious thought. Tom PS, had a lovely time away.
Date: 9/5/2021 8:43:00 PM
I see you made it up but before I read the comments below, I thought it was true!! Very impressive!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/6/2021 11:15:00 AM
Good comment, Andrea!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/6/2021 1:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea, I never know what my muse will come up with, my imagination runs riot sometimes lol. Tom
Date: 9/5/2021 3:41:00 PM
Love it! -- No postponed court days or stays of execution. No slobbering sympathy for a cold-out murderer. Simple justice -- ruling , incarceration, execution. What's so wrong about that?! ~ Angels, we're not. GREAT POEM, Tom!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/6/2021 1:41:00 AM
Thank you very much Gershon, some crimes are beyond forgiveness and if you play with fire you're going to get burnt. Tom
Date: 9/5/2021 3:09:00 PM
It’s very true Tom crime doesn’t pay, an eye for an eye at the end of the day. The reward for crime is living with the guilt of one’s actions. A marvellous write! ~ Belle
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/6/2021 1:47:00 AM
Thank you very much Belle, im happy you enjoyed it. Theres certainly a dark side in society that we don't often hear about. Tom
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