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“The Evolution of a Broken Heart” In thy hands, I gently placed it lacking hesitation’s pleas and virtues ‘twas ne’er a time to be uncourageous plucked somewhere from deep within my honorable, clean gilded home where pure intention sat regally spartan upon her stony throne In thy hands, I gently placed it Like some glistening pulmonary metronome pushing for LIFE defibrillating bleeding heart beating like a drowning tin drum detonating in time with yours swallowed up by your Tsunami Oceans of sick suffocating bad love, captive of your rattling cages of madness, twisted hidden lies, monsters defecating over innocence, vile and bitter rages Black Dog Barking feral, never ending sadness, the war rages and it rages In thy hands, it stopped in strangled default stages ‘twas the small heart next to mine I saved first pushed to safety through the light wielding cracks and freedom spaces swam away like a tadpole up for air and refined graces Our story now a flock of dark murderous ravens fleeing across the black book's pages she forgot the Golden Chord in her mouth and dropped it - you betrayed us In thy hands, I gently placed it In thy hands, you squeezed its life blood as if wringing the neck of a worn laundry rag sucked out the remnant of a soul in staggered stages, its torn mind, ripped dry and cold it snapped like a brittle twig like a yolkless egg cracked open stopped dead and useless the pieces lost and broken floated away dissolving invisible a transitory homeless ghost now walking Purgatory’s halls miserable and defeated In the mirror what reflection is there left? A Ghost holding a hidden key, a Golden Chord and ever shining Crucifix, will wait and never rest (Lovejoy-Burton/Mar 2018) "Get out of My House" / Kate Bush https://youtu.be/_uHUUwgGW5c “It is more than likely I will never leave your side, I will remain a Ghost to haunt your conscience forever” (Anonymous) “Sometimes fate is like a small sandstorm that keeps changing directions. You change direction but the sandstorm chases you. You turn again, but the storm adjusts. Over and over you play this out, like some ominous dance with death just before dawn. Why? Because this storm isn't something that blew in from far away, something that has nothing to do with you. This storm is you. Something inside of you. So all you can do is give in to it, step right inside the storm, closing your eyes and plugging up your ears so the sand doesn't get in, and walk through it, step by step. There's no sun there, no moon, no direction, no sense of time. Just fine white sand swirling up into the sky like pulverized bones. That's the kind of sandstorm you need to imagine. And you really will have to make it through that violent, metaphysical, symbolic storm. No matter how metaphysical or symbolic it might be, make no mistake about it: it will cut through flesh like a thousand razor blades. People will bleed there, and you will bleed too. Hot, red blood. You'll catch that blood in your hands, your own blood and the blood of others. And once the storm is over you won't remember how you made it through, how you managed to survive. You won't even be sure, in fact, whether the storm is really over. But one thing is certain. When you come out of the storm you won't be the same person who walked in. That's what this storm's all about.” (Huraki Murakami, "Kafka on the Shore") Definintion of SPARTAN: A native or inhabitant of ancient Sparta A person of great courage and self-discipline

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Date: 5/4/2018 9:50:00 AM
I don't know what I enjoyed more your poem or the end note. I think you should take your end note and post it separately. You are a refreshing singular mind here on the soup Leanne, you remind me of Paloma, if you don't know her ask Tom.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 5/4/2018 9:55:00 AM
Ah, the old Evolution of a Broken Heart...you know, I've written so many now, I forget what I've written sometimes. I loved this poem. Yes, July...err Tom, made a point of bringing Paloma to my attention when I first arrived. She has a style all of her own. It's like reading another language...that's why I add in my footnotes. lol...not really, I just like researching. It's all open to the reader's interpretation.
Date: 3/11/2018 4:20:00 PM
The poem is amazing as is the note at the bottom. It's something I wish I could say I didn't understand or I didn't get but because I do it's that much more amazing. Awesomeness Leanne!
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/11/2018 5:54:00 PM
Thank you Shadow of the Past. Always contactable on SoupMail.
Date: 3/6/2018 8:27:00 PM
Deep. Haunting. Magnificent. You do illustrate the pain and i feel it in my bones by the end.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/6/2018 8:40:00 PM
Aint LIFE grand... it ain't all Milk and Honey. :) Thanks James. We are all on our own journey and that journey is our best story. No matter where we find ourself, or at what stage that is...it could be flying free or doing time. The story is ALL ours and we have the strength and the power inside us always, even when we are at our lowest, to make it worth the ride. At some point in life a short straw will be drawn, it is then an individual, on their own, has to make the decision to live the story or not. Without encouragement a person has to find the strength to believe entirely in themself, no matter how arrogant that may sound. Faith and belief in something greater can assist, you know, like The Law of the Universe, or God. It's survival.
Date: 3/6/2018 10:47:00 AM
Your word flow is astounding. Your message in this poem, moreso. Never lose this strength.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/6/2018 8:39:00 PM
Ah Drake you are an inspiration and a poet. I shall never lose my strength, it is genetic. All the power back at you brother.
Date: 3/6/2018 4:42:00 AM
Bold and haunting poem, Leanne! Depth of thought as always from your cerebral love dipped pen. Great lines ... a drowning tin drum detonating in time with yours swallowed up by your Tsunami Oceans of sick suffocating love. Ty for the keen philosophical addendum. Another sterling poetic offering. Bright cloud raindrops of wisdom distilled to the lowly. Such a radiant golden pen you possess. Powerful poetry at it's best. Love and joy always.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/6/2018 8:38:00 PM
Too kind Monsieur Robinson. My writing absolutely pales in comparison to the centrifugal magnificent pace of your 5th Dimension Brain.
Date: 3/4/2018 4:35:00 PM
an emotionally charged poem with a fierce statement of fiery furious anger by one of strong will...my first thought after reading
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/4/2018 4:59:00 PM
I'm really a big soft-hearted pussycat...I got a bit carried away with all the Poe paraphernalia spreading virally around the Broth.
Date: 3/4/2018 1:00:00 PM
A powerful write indeed...As I've come to expect from you...You have wonderful things to say and you do it well...All the best
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/4/2018 1:07:00 PM
A gentle man as always. That is too kind and gracious. This is a story of tragedy and eventual redemption. Thank you Arturo.
Date: 3/4/2018 12:00:00 PM
Yi, as a Libra, where to start with all the page stimulation? Drama delivered & grabbed me w/ heated intense passion. I've never gotten poem graphic as you conquered here (I'm a body organ wimp.) U woke me up. I know this feeling, I've divorced this man AFTER such emotions were spent & I no longer cared. These deeply inflicted pains need shoved down his throat, then elax before locking him in a closet after which she should heal realizing he wasn't who she thought. That's my story! Poetry hugs..
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/4/2018 1:49:00 PM
A body organ wimp is my way of saying I get grossed out on verbals and visuals of such. I'm calling myself a wimp. It was NOT in any way a criticism of your imagery, it only aided the passionate drama you unfolded. I'm an eye shutter on movies of such - I'm sure you know a me! I'm enjoying our dialogue, hope you are, too. Sweetie, I appreciate the sympathy but my LOW time is in the past, my current is fulfilling, my cup, she runneth over. Go in a good way ... CayCay
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/4/2018 12:57:00 PM
I came across some historic visuals the other day during my research of what the Apaches did with the organs of male enemies (white man) after execution. They weren't body organ wimps and it kind of fits with the theme here, but I'll leave that vision lying flaccid in vivid imaginations for the time being.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/4/2018 12:47:00 PM
The devil's in the details...my sympathy extended to you Cay Cay. Your response is natural. What the ...... is a body organ wimp? It's got me thinking now - and that could be dangerous.
Date: 3/4/2018 10:36:00 AM
Is it time tha heals a broken heart or is it love? In a world where true love does not really exist, just a valley of broken hearts, it is just a sign of the times I guess... Deep storytelling... As always..
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/4/2018 10:48:00 AM
Time does not exist anymore when a heart is broken and lost.True Love does exist. It continues to LOVE and reach out after Death in places where time does not exist..
Date: 3/3/2018 11:12:00 PM
Powerful poem. A deep most enjoyable read. Well done, Leanne.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/4/2018 1:12:00 AM
Thank you Line. Read all your poems last night. Betrayal is a dark and fascinating subject to ponder.
Date: 3/3/2018 8:35:00 PM
I enjoy the lyrical intensity of recounting sometimes abrasive romantic contortions, Leanne...your style of amazing leaps "Our story now a flock of black ravens fleeing across the pages" one of numerous splendid lines!
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/4/2018 1:12:00 AM
Thank you James ...Jimbo Marshall Goff. Your poems and stories are Stellar. You are one of my all time favourite reads.
Date: 3/3/2018 7:57:00 PM
It's just a story July, another chapter. I'm as tough as an old boot. This is a story for Georgia. I will NEVER GIVE UP on LOVE. The right and the best and brightest kind of love. To find that love, sometimes one has to walk through the darkest storm to find the Light of that Love.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/4/2018 1:42:00 PM
Thanks Cay Cay. I am a strong person, I do not give up on anyone I love ever...and if you believe the Universe will deliver, it usually does. Beautiful news for you below. You have travelled a hard road through your storm and found the Love and joy you have earned and deserve. Sending you good karma.x
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/4/2018 12:22:00 PM
This is where I can testify. Without going into how deep, dark, apathetic & lethargic I'd become after decades as an upbeat person, I will share that I'd given up on my one consistent desire; my ideal partner and I fought just to stay HERE for my special needs son. Now, I've had 5 years of bliss. What I wanted by Thursday, as we humans do, the universe delivered in my 50's - my TRUE soulmate. Never give up, just know that even though he/she will not fall thru the ceiling, the universe will deliver in its time and way. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/3/2018 7:59:00 PM
Perhaps a Gothic Romance. A good story for Eve Winfield here on this site, interesting writer.

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