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The Evening Visitor

I’m glad that you did not forget the date, My friend. Pull shut the wooden garden gate And walk along the pathway paved with slate Up to the house now, it is getting late. I lit a crackling fire in the grate And ladled steaming soup in every plate. It was a long day; please excuse the state Of house and kitchen. But at any rate You’re here! The dog is dozing in his crate. My son's asleep; today he learned to skate. Outside remain all worry, stress and hate; We’re inside, warm and loved, and thank our fate. August 22, 2016 For contest Monorhyme Mania Sponsored by John Hamilton 5th place

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Date: 7/17/2018 3:45:00 PM
Awesome, Agnes. What an exquisitely penned inviting poem. Very rich in flavour and rhyme.
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Date: 8/30/2016 3:38:00 PM
Agnes, congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/30/2016 4:41:00 PM
Thank you, luloo
Date: 8/30/2016 2:50:00 PM
This is one of the best 'feel good' winning poems, Agnes. Your house is your home! Congrats on your fine win! Regards // paul
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/30/2016 3:30:00 PM
Thank you, Paul.
Date: 8/29/2016 6:53:00 PM
Well done and congratulations on this one, Agnes! It sounds like you're having a cozy evening.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/29/2016 9:26:00 PM
Thank you, Lin.
Date: 8/26/2016 12:27:00 PM
Let it rain - we're inside, warm, loved and safe - that's a message that resonates with me and your poem has great flow and energy. It is quite creative and most enjoyable. Good luck in all things ... CayCay
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/26/2016 9:36:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, CayCay.
Date: 8/22/2016 4:37:00 PM
Such lovely imagery Agnes you made it seem like a lovely cosy home to visit:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/22/2016 6:09:00 PM
Thank you, Jan

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