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The Essence of Rose

In the twilight hours Out here on this ledge I am filled With the essence of Rose As a gentle breath stirs Her fallen petals Strewn over That long and winding road Here on the brink Where so many have come Before me And simply let go I find myself wondering Why I am here Yet! I am afraid to know So I cling to this ledge Overcome with fear Knowing the end is near For there's no going back Once you are here for that moment In Time Disappeared So... I sit here Filled up With the essence of Rose Each petal A memory Etched forever On that road of life Paved with both Joy and misery Until the last petal falls Then I finally let go Here at the end of the road I, the last tear From the faded blue eye Of dear Old wild Rose

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Date: 6/30/2021 3:29:00 PM
Such a touching piece Elaine, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/28/2021 8:49:00 PM
A great personification, Elaine, congratulations on your win in Caren's contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/12/2018 7:27:00 AM
Elaine, your Essence of Rose is beautiful. I am at the age where I reminisce quite a bit and I can truly relate to this poem. I am so glad you directed me to it, it was certainly well worth the read. Thank you for sharing. John
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Elaine George
Date: 1/18/2018 10:12:00 AM
Thank you so much for your much appreciated comments, John. sincerely, Elaine
Date: 3/14/2016 10:46:00 AM
Hi! I really love this poem and I am using it to talk about in an essay for English class! I was wondering if I could have some more info on the author and the poem(summary, examples of literary devices, etc.) Thanks!
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Date: 2/18/2016 11:57:00 AM
I love the "filled with the essence of rose"...so deeply melancholy...visual and poignant
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Elaine George
Date: 2/20/2016 5:57:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by, Ingrid, and for your kind comments. Elaine
Date: 2/16/2016 8:59:00 AM
great quality with wonderful fitting of words and lines. The grace from this page is worth more than a 7. Visiting your pages always come with meeting my expectations and with this I say "Keep on writing please".. So so incredible.
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Elaine George
Date: 2/16/2016 9:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, Funom, for your kind comments and continued support of my writing. Elaine
Date: 2/14/2016 11:20:00 AM
The sadness is but part of the whole. To be able to spread beauty like a rose is a beautiful gift and a blessing. Touching personification.
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Elaine George
Date: 2/14/2016 2:28:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by and for your comments, Dineen. Elaine
Date: 12/29/2015 10:37:00 AM
A beautiful and tender farewell. Have a great 2016. Love, daver
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Elaine George
Date: 12/30/2015 5:45:00 PM
Thank you, Dave. I always love hearing from you.
Date: 8/12/2015 1:51:00 PM
Wow. A sad story yet a good poem -JT
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Date: 8/4/2015 9:01:00 AM
Elaine, it was good to get a comment from you. Please do write some new poetry for us!
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Date: 8/3/2015 4:51:00 AM
Ah yes dear Elaine, "Each petal A memory Etched forever On that road of life Paved with both Joy and misery".... That puts this beauty of a write into perspective for me. Melancholy elegance are the only words I can come up with to describe the feeling I got from this...Straight to my favs! Your friend and fan - Tim
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Elaine George
Date: 8/3/2015 6:32:00 PM
Hi, Tim. It has been awhile. Thank you for your very kind comments on this personification. It had been forming in my mind for some time, so I finally penned it. Thank you so much for saving it to your fav's; that means a great deal to me. Your friend, Elaine
Date: 8/2/2015 10:30:00 PM
Lovely piece, my dear....smooth flowing....Yes, time passes...life is transient...now is our time to fill the world with our scent. Very touching
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Elaine George
Date: 8/3/2015 6:29:00 PM
Hi, Eileen. Thank you for taking the time to read my poetry and...for your kind comments. Elaine
Date: 7/29/2015 9:18:00 PM
This is lovely, Elaine! So smooth flowing and elegantly penned. I enjoyed this very much!
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Date: 8/3/2015 6:28:00 PM
Hi, Kelly, Thank you for taking the time to read my poetry and...for your kind comments. Elaine
Date: 7/23/2015 10:29:00 AM
Top marks for this beautiful and touching personification, Elaine! We all cling on for dear life, fully knowing that our time will eventually come. In the meantime may this rose captivate us with its essence and fragrance! #7 All the best. // paul
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Elaine George
Date: 7/24/2015 5:04:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment, Paul.
Date: 7/23/2015 5:08:00 AM
Only a Rose so the song says..yet you bring it to life the cycle of it's life depicting life itself, till the last petal falls, wow that is a powerful piece of personification Elaine...
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Elaine George
Date: 7/24/2015 5:00:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to read this, Harry. And...thank you for your kind comments. Elaine
Date: 7/22/2015 3:55:00 PM
I must class this as an epic write . Simply have to add this gem to my fav list. Thanks and a true pleasure to read...
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Date: 7/22/2015 4:50:00 PM
Thank you for truly understanding this write, Robert, and for adding it to your fav list; it means so much to me. Elaine
Date: 7/20/2015 11:44:00 AM
- A beautiful rose ...... love the aroma coming from your beautiful poem Elaine ! (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Elaine George
Date: 7/20/2015 11:48:00 AM
Thank you for your comments, Anne Lise. Elaine
Date: 7/19/2015 7:22:00 AM
I see you are also Canadian. Which part of Canada are you from? Often what we think of as the end of the road an entry to a fabulous destination. After all roads are designed to get us to the places we dream of. You strike me as a prolific dreamer.
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Date: 7/20/2015 10:10:00 AM
Hi, Richard. Yes! I am from Canada, born in Saint John, N.B. and currently living in Ontario for the last 35 years. Yes! I am a prolific dreamer when it comes to my writing. Thank you for taking the time to read my work. I will be reading more of yours shortly. bfn Elaine
Date: 7/18/2015 2:43:00 PM
I like the clinging to rose as an end of destination. Seems the roses are the last to go when autumn is over and winter approaches. Wonderful to hear from you, dear Lainie. Love and happiness on ya. daver
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Elaine George
Date: 7/20/2015 10:06:00 AM
Thank you, Dave. So nice hearing from you and thank you for your kind comments. The novel is back of the shelf in the closet...it seems it is a never ending story. What I have decided to do is create a book of short stories for the time being. I will keep you posted. Lainie
Date: 7/17/2015 1:23:00 PM
I simply love poems about Roses, and boy did I enjoy this one, James//xx
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Date: 7/17/2015 5:01:00 PM
Thank you for your comments, James. Most appreciated. elaine
Date: 7/17/2015 6:38:00 AM
Elaine, as beautiful as the rose is your poem!!!welcome back!!=')~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 7/17/2015 4:48:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poem, Olive and for your very kind comments. Elaine
Date: 7/16/2015 3:21:00 PM
How wonderful to have you back, write me & get me abreast of all you have been up to! aleezadeltaATaolDOTcom Light & Love
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Elaine George
Date: 7/17/2015 4:47:00 PM
Hi Deb, I will write you soon. All is well. Thanks for dropping by. Elaine
Date: 7/15/2015 11:22:00 PM
wow, you have NOT LOST your talent. SO good to see you back here with such an amazing piece, Elaine. It is so smooth flowing and beautiful!!
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Elaine George
Date: 7/16/2015 12:12:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. it is good to be back, if only for a while. Elaine

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