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The Equation of Relation

I choose to love, And not hurt anyone, And what I get right back, Around and within and about, Is pleasantness and affection, When love sometimes sparks. The quiet reassurance, That timely relativity, That cheerful greeting, The courteous sidestep. That feeling in someone’s eyes, The sentiment shown, Where endearment and liking, Are not unknown. Realising that equations are numerical, And that numbers are real by locations, Enthuses me to continue and to find, The equation of friends and connections, The university that equates with socialism, The news channel which makes shocking equations, The taxi-man who is a number to himself, The supermarket that does its financial sums, The supervisor who relates warmly and firmly, And that lover who equates with me. Life is not a problem, Because I chose life, And every day life chooses me, When it returns much good, Without being fully understood.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/30/2020 11:24:00 PM
Apt authentic formatting. Subtle exploration of topic. Inspiring account of your love recognition.
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Dominique Webb
Date: 5/31/2020 9:13:00 AM
Thank you very much Jasmine. We must relate even though we are not fully understood, and things will get better, soon. Evolution is with us, and we are all evolving every day.
Date: 3/20/2016 12:11:00 AM
Rhoda, Congratulations on your awesome "Equations win." LINDA
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Date: 3/14/2016 8:41:00 PM
Well done on your win, Rhoda.
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Dominique Webb
Date: 3/15/2016 4:43:00 AM
Thank you very much, Lin.
Date: 3/14/2016 5:18:00 PM
Rhoda, congrats on your placement! -luloo *smiles*
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Dominique Webb
Date: 3/15/2016 4:42:00 AM
I enjoyed it!
Date: 3/14/2016 4:34:00 PM
very nice, congrats looking forward to seeing more of the same!
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Dominique Webb
Date: 3/15/2016 4:41:00 AM
Thanks for the 3rd place! I enjoyed writing this one as I thoroughly believe in evolution. I read Darwin 15 times when I was 13 (if you don't mind me boasting), and it changed my life in terms of my confidence, relationships, rights etc, so I am a far better person today for reading about evolution as a young teen.

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