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The Epiphany

The phone call changed everything.... As I ran into the hospital room The tears rolled down my face. So fragile she was, In so much pain. Then it hit me.... Today could be the day I lose her, As they rushed her to surgery. ....Her recovery was so slow, So painful. At her age her body did not cooperate. Once again it hit me.... I had to be the strong one now. I had to take care of her. My mother, who would never again Be strong and independant. As she had been her whole life. ....I had always needed her. She had always been there for me. Now, she needed me And I prayed I would not let her down. for Desiree Birdseye's "Epiphanies" contest

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Date: 2/21/2011 12:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Francine in Desiree's contest "Epiphanies". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/30/2011 1:07:00 PM
Hi Francine Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Desiree's contest. Best wishes, Kory
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Date: 1/30/2011 12:15:00 PM
Congrats Francine on your big win in the Epiphanies contest with this brilliant entry ..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 1/30/2011 6:41:00 AM
So very touching and beautiful. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 1/30/2011 5:12:00 AM
congrads on your win, jhl
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Date: 1/29/2011 11:49:00 PM
special congrats on your fine win, francine..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/29/2011 7:17:00 PM
Indeed....those moments come when we reverse our roles....mother and child...Oh yes...a melancholy epiphany this is! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/29/2011 4:45:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Francine
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Date: 1/29/2011 4:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/29/2011 3:12:00 PM
Yes, one day it all turns around. I'm glad I got to finally see this one from you,Francine. That's why I love the winners' circle. Sometimes I catch excellent poetry of my friends that I had somehow missed earlier. Luv, Andrea PS and a BIG congratulations!
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Date: 1/29/2011 2:33:00 PM
A beautiful touching poem. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/9/2011 9:08:00 AM
Heartfelt poetry at it's best Francine, good luck in the contest....:)
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Date: 1/3/2011 3:45:00 AM
What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/2/2011 9:17:00 PM
Very tender and touching write Francine.. wish u much success in the contest my friend with luv.. for an awesome piece...
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Date: 1/2/2011 6:09:00 PM
Currently, I am in a very similar situation. You have described everything quite well in this offering. Desiree should give you some stong consideration.
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